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133

133 That's were I aspire to be Its at the top of the ladder Makes others feel sadder At the though of being second Slowly realising an average score beckoned And to sum 133 up Its now time for me to shut up

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/30/2010 10:51:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Chris. Wishing you a beautiful weekend filled with inspiration. Thank you for your comments on my poetry. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2010 9:14:00 PM

Hey, what does 133 mean for you? Does that number have a significance? The poem makes me want to know! LUv, Andrea

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 7/29/2010 2:23:00 PM

re com. .Of course what you said is all true,If no one read me here,its useless posting dear :) and I do like it when others read me or write in my honor as you did,and thats why I thank you again. .and I'm sure you are read by the best,tnks for stopping by,ninight or good day :)Celene!

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 7/29/2010 2:02:00 PM

Tnks for the dedication,I'm flattered and blushing,lol!Your appreciation to others work will get you on the ladder top.You asked me for the secret,Its feeling always at the bottom of the ladder with a will to learn from others,write for fun not to compete,I make friends,enjoy ,Best secret,Write my heart out,lol.Good titles help,dear new friend,I'm honoured,I shall read more of you,but now its late ön the island,time to sleep..In the coming days I shall read more,tnks again..tmfvs,Celene :)blush