133

133
That's were I aspire to be
Its at the top of the ladder
Makes others feel sadder
At the though of being second
Slowly realising an average score beckoned
And to sum 133 up
Its now time for me to shut up
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 10:51 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Chris. Wishing you a beautiful weekend filled with inspiration. Thank you for your comments on my poetry. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 9:14 PM
Hey, what does 133 mean for you? Does that number have a significance? The poem makes me want to know! LUv, Andrea
Bloomsfield Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 2:23 PM
re com. .Of course what you said is all true,If no one read me here,its useless posting dear :) and I do like it when others read me or write in my honor as you did,and thats why I thank you again. .and I'm sure you are read by the best,tnks for stopping by,ninight or good day :)Celene!
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July 29, 2010 at 2:02 PM
Tnks for the dedication,I'm flattered and blushing,lol!Your appreciation to others work will get you on the ladder top.You asked me for the secret,Its feeling always at the bottom of the ladder with a will to learn from others,write for fun not to compete,I make friends,enjoy ,Best secret,Write my heart out,lol.Good titles help,dear new friend,I'm honoured,I shall read more of you,but now its late ön the island,time to sleep..In the coming days I shall read more,tnks again..tmfvs,Celene :)blush
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