12:00

8:00pm
My mom tucked me into bed
She said good night
Kissed my head
Shut the door
The room went dark

9:00pm
I was sleeping
Dreaming about my love
She was beautiful
Hair flowing in the breeze
We were at the beach
I gave her a-
-CREEK-

10:00pm
What was that
I heard a creek
Looked around 
Nothing

11:00pm
-CREEK-
Again 
What’s that
I looked around
My closet’s open a jar

11:59pm
staring 
staring
staring...

12:00am
I'm with my love
Forever...
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September 2, 2019 at 11:27 AM
Interesting way to handle life.
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