11 D

It seems there's only one specific time,
Two worlds are same,
The one behind me in the mirror,
Sharing half the blame...
That's just another universe,
Until its under view,
Then splits another timeline,
At the end of your review...
Like webs that seem to permeate,
And then they multiply,
For every choice you're given,
There's a million more that rise...
The 4th and 8th dimensions,
Seem to join the other 9,
Like 3 dimensional paradoxes,
Joined by two inside...
I know its hard to comprehend,
But think outside the box,
Whoever thought that iron bars,
Could come from melted rocks...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Tsiluma Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 10:35 AM
NICE! I love your mention of the dimensions and the thought brought out in the last two lines ties up the whole theme well.
Brown Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 7:42 AM
Wow where did this week go? I am reading some amazing poetry this morning. It was a pleasure to read yours and I thank you for sharing it Terrence. Have a great weekend and I will be back Monday to read more. Love, Carol
Beck Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 4:38 AM
marvellous poetry....clever witty well written.......more please !
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