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10+ Year Old Poem of Mine. "the Little Key"

THE LITTLE KEY The little key said to the Lock he wanted to be free the Lock responded Im fear HeHe it growled and snarled Looked mean the little Key shook at the scene the Lock was Big MAde solid Told the little Key Only the bad Possibilities which would be sounds came into the little keys ears with endless fears As Nightmares creeping around in our minds loney,Low Esteem, All of what you feel at sometime it seems Another Key came up said be Free The little Key Said Unlock the lock For me Pleasee He Said You are Good I know But My shape wont work Be Strong with Esteem Sure theres bad I know But Also Good when Found would Overflow the little Key Shook and Wink; Close His eyes CliCK CliCk ClinK Light Appeared My writing has changed so much since then. I first started writing poetry in about 10th grade, yet, still I am not even close to the quality of art I want to approach (Shakespeare, Dante, etc...). My older poems usually tried to teach a moral (lol). Hope you enjoy reading it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/27/2009 4:37:00 AM
Yes Anthony, I did enjoy reading it. You are a very good poet. I think you will one day be where you want to be with your poetry. Have Faith you will get there. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/26/2009 6:49:00 PM
You know its not what the theme is, its about the will to try, lots of people have it in them they just don't try, you have it all and the poem was good, keep your faith in yourself and you'll accomplish what you want, God bless and keep the writings flowing, Robert A. Ball
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