10 Districts of Reality

Dimension zero is divineIf God exists he’s here to find
Where all dimensions intertwine
To underlie sublime design

Dimension one is deemed a dot
Life’s starting point, existence’s plot
The joint of nothing and a lot
As emptiness becomes a thought

Dimension two morphs points to lines
Defining axis X and Y

A 3-D line becomes a tube
Circle to sphere, and square to cube
As mass and gravity combine 
In three-dimensional design

Dimension four will not ignore
Gaps between after and before
Boredom’s a whore and wait’s a crime
Therefore dimension four is time

Always ahead but yet behind
Time measures everything alive
Time resurrects dimension five
The fifth dimension is the mind
Dimension six is the “unknown”
Life’s questions thrive here on their own
“Why are we here?’ ‘Are we alone?”
The answers rein the 6-D throne

Seven dimensional is luck
That choice of when and where to stop
Choice is the taker-chance on top
As choice and luck retreat to ....

The eighth dimension is the soul
Here, space and time defy control
Two black holes mate, creating 8
Reincarnating the innate

The next dimension is cloud nine
The high that tries to mime divine
As all extremities combine
From highest high to deepest depth
Nine is the high of crystal meth
The ecstasy of life and breath

Too bad the tenth dimension’s death

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007



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Date: 5/31/2024 9:24:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/13/2016 10:00:00 AM
elena, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 10/31/2015 6:31:00 PM
please notE: Einstein's fourth dimension slightly plagiarized....
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