1403 hiku waterfall

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.   c                     s                l     
     l                      p               o
       e                    a                o
         a                    r                k           |
            r                   k               e       > *<
                                  l                d        |
              w                   i                                                 l 
                 a                 n                 l                           > *<
                   t                 g                 i           |                |
                    e                                   k      > *<
                      r                  c               e         |                            |
                                          r                                                   > *<
                       c                  y                 b                                   |
                         a                 s                 r               |
                          s                 t                 i            > *<
                            c                a                l               |
                             a                l                 l                        |
             |                 d                                i                    > *<
          > *<               e               d               a                      l
             |                    s              r                n
                          l                        o                t                           |                                                                                                                                                                                                                 
                       > *<                     p                                         > *<                                                                                                                                              
                          |                         s                 g                         |
                                                                        e
                                                       e                 m
                          |                             s                 s
                       > *<                            c                                |
                          |                                 a                           > *< 
                                                             p                             |
                                                               e

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Ryan Geoffrey Hayward

Date: 8/13/2025 6:02:00 PM

Just like a waterfall and great poetry reads like it when the words flow so well. Amazing poem and presentation.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/12/2025 11:45:00 AM

- Beautiful silver gems, S.V. :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/12/2025 11:55:00 AM

Oh Anne-Lise I just looked for yours and saw that you have already done a waterfall, and yours is beautiful. ( Mine is a mess compared to yours and I dont have time to tidy mine up_) Thanks for encouraging comment my friend.