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1-22-10 Naked Sparrow

the cold is eating my soul black blood seeping from my eyes gouged out i no longer see within this swarming darkness helpless i claw at my face go away! and just leave me alone!. . . im sitting here in ragged twilight id try to cover my body naked beneath these torn raggs only im too busy flailing in the black screaming out to the endless night like a banchee my voice no more distinguishable from an animal never to its listeners, the walls echoing back, reverberaiting death sounds in the stale air let this scream excape my soul crying and i feel ripped apart fallen through the ice, drowning running out of air to breath and it seems no one can save me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/29/2010 10:53:00 AM
Thank you as well. yes you can tell me a story. On soup mail. Than I will send a short one of mine. I like this tittle alot . It goes with your poem. Ican tell you are real How do you pick up good lines on your poems. Now Ia. a big fan of yours. P.D.
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Date: 2/1/2010 3:21:00 PM
Wow.Your words remind me of a poem of mine," Forgotten Soul" thats pretty cool. Very deep image of angst in your write here. -Always Lynette
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Date: 1/24/2010 2:04:00 PM
Great imagination.Just wanted to say hello and hope all is well with you.
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Date: 1/24/2010 1:40:00 PM
Very nice read...love it...Marty
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Date: 1/23/2010 1:02:00 PM
wow, so deep with emotion exactly what a poem needs. Enjoy your weekend and loved the read. :)
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Date: 1/23/2010 12:36:00 PM
A true and pain ridden write great work Rain your work as always is a true window into your life great wrok
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