05-04-Xxxx

Yoda clever was right on cue
And Obie did swell tae kwon do
But one day unique
In star wars double speak
Must be "May the 4th" be with you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 9:53 PM
haha, this is so CUTE. You are quite the limerist. Is that a word? I need to look it up because one day this week I intend to post a shrift about a limerist. But this spell check thing is telling me it's not a word! Limericist??
Breidenthal Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 2:41 PM
Don't know how I haven't read this one! Hah, all in all , I liked! Good job! Always, Laura
Duncan Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 12:50 PM
Love it Duke,,,,, tell me what May 4th is ;} my granddaughter just went to a b-day party on this past Saturday Star-wars theme. Thank you as always for reading my words "Glossy Blooms" I've been off line for 2 1/2 weeks. Power point on my cp was going out, thank you for stopping by ;}
Anglesey Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 3:00 AM
Love the clever wit. Thanks for the chuckle. Well written :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 2:49 PM
How cute, Duke. and regarding the melancholy memory, you were right on both counts. My dad became impossible to live with for his schizophrenia, not very treatable in the 50's, so my mom left WAshington and returned to the farm where she was raised in Iowa.
O'Leary Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 12:06 PM
Thith ith a very clever uth of wordth... Terry (another great limerick!)
Squyres Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 4:44 PM
Clever write !!! May the 4th be with you !!! Love it !!! All smiles !! Thanks for dropping by... our flaws, though we dislike them, are part of who we are. I have many I dislike also !! And yes, Southern lady here ... Louisiana !!
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May 11, 2013 at 4:38 PM
Hello Duke, i love Yoda, i have the force on my side... :-) Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda
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May 4, 2013 at 3:26 PM
Thank you ...... it's night here in Norway now .... I go to bed with a smile on my lips. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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