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-passion- Part2

little lips, little kiss, leading down, down, suckel on the tender nippels, moans softly let out, fingers trailing, lips following, still leading down, jeans receding, blood is beating, hard into stretched skin, tip of tounge and tips of lips, teasing gentle head, show some pleasing, cloths dropping off the edge of the bed, ready screaming, still whispering, so no one does awake, hands are touching, eyes are seeing, skin thats perspiring, passion feeling, night is falling, still we're seeking, evermore, that feeling, that extacy, screaming more, tounge tickels gentel skin, small fingers gently guide, then its in, "ready" question asked, lips connect as an answer fast, like ocean waves, got the movement down, passion sweating from the crown, rocking incidently to the heart beats sound, ohmigosh, now screaming out, quietly screaming out, unready nevermore, eyes seeking eyes in the dark, lips connecting with flying sparks, skin melting, a mix of one, tears spilling, the reason: none unspoken words released in gasps sworn, yours to please, evermore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/31/2010 11:02:00 AM
You finnished nicely . This is good music. I am gonna call it music. A bit to much . Hey but that is one hot momment you poemed it all out good. I can not knock one of these . Read more later Little Bird of Rain.
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Date: 3/31/2010 10:40:00 AM
Wow. Great. Again speechless. But great passion.
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Date: 3/31/2010 10:26:00 AM
thanks Serenity (: and everyone else i appreciate whatever comments you leave, please be honest, i think i need to revise this part. its a one peice poem but i ran out of room so i had to break it up. love always, Rainbow
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Date: 3/31/2010 10:18:00 AM
I really like this rain :) I read both parts!
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