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In lovely riddles you speak of Goddesses, those held above the world. For each of us I feel you would find a way, to bring us back a star. Glowing bright, you would pass that orb into our gentle hands, to grow as children would above the falty of man. You speak in lovely riddles and forget to include yourself, for if we are such Goddesses, you must be a God yourself.

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Date: 8/20/2012 11:04:00 AM
Jay, this poem are just ... BEAUTIFUL ....!!! - A golden gem !!!! - Have a lovely new week in sunshine & love. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/17/2012 10:21:00 PM
Wow, what a powerful tribute to whomever this "God" must be, Jay! Your last four lines are especially poignant and touching...Impressive!--Ngoc
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Date: 8/17/2012 8:04:00 PM
Jay, if a God could give you, and the others, this gift,nay, this tribute of steadfast love in star, then this God would become the Architect of everlasting life above - No more noble an objective would a Creator pine to satisfy - your love is sweet as spirit - " You would pass that orb into our gentle hands..." What God could reject such caress? With Respect - J.A.B.
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Date: 8/17/2012 10:04:00 AM
Jay this I like...David
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Date: 8/17/2012 9:42:00 AM
It is a pleasure to be reading so many diverse poems this morning Jay. I am very happy to have been able to read yours. Thank you for sharing your well written poetry. Have a very beautiful and joyful weekend. Love, Carol
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