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- Young Divine Happiness -

She is young and free, and most of her love lies in front of her As the dawning twilight holds one breathless air under misted whispers A sight she often looks beyond the vast land that always ends in the ocean Upon the rocks driven by a sea breeze salted fragrance lingers Waves and natural forces full of power draws upon sound and rhythm Mixed echoes crying gulls rise and fall as they crash ringing home To walk along the beach barefoot, she has time to be young Reflecting back on each step forward petals of a sunbeam enters Feeling divine happiness every second heartbeat without a special reason Time begins to challenge the labours of the trodden path Live it is to dare, nobody has gone in her step before Standing upon the apex captivated by thought spiralling Form a sculpture of wet sand, without being critical Leaving an imprint under the shell where holds precious pearls A way to expose oneself to something unfamiliar and unsafe Petals of a flower dancing to a winds melody rings midnight bells She dreams of love, with expectations and hope to be a queen Under the starlight where a moon's cradle swoons her with a smile A hand to hold, the first kiss ... a puzzling thought Where memories are born a fire always burns regally sealed A collaborated poem Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 08.06. 2017 (unrhymed couplets) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 8/23/2017 9:03:00 PM
Hi Liam n' Anne- Lise!:))Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each!+!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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