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- The Psychopath Rarely Cries -

Her thoughts rolls as a high-speed rail
                     with the sound of heartbeat and pumping pulses
                     He has planned a murder down to the last detail
                   without a hint of guilty conscience - leaves no trace






24.03.2019
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Writing Challenge 5
Four Lines - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Dear Heart
3rd place in the contest

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Phatt Matt Date: 9/11/2019 9:19:00 PM Another great and dark masterpiece well done ~ Matt Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/13/2019 4:16:00 AM - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, Phatt :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France Date: 3/29/2019 5:53:00 PM Annie-Lise, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderfully penned piece, very dark and deep ! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/30/2019 3:58:00 PM - You have great contest, D.H. ... many thanks for my place on your winning list :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/27/2019 3:34:00 PM here to greet you congrats, anne... happy huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/28/2019 4:25:00 AM - Many thanks for the congrats, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Smith Date: 3/27/2019 2:50:00 PM Excellent poem Anne-Lise, a great dark read. :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/27/2019 2:57:00 PM - Many thanks Gary, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso Date: 3/25/2019 10:32:00 PM Sometimes even silent ones leave a trace!!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2019 4:49:00 AM - Many thanks Arthur, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/25/2019 9:33:00 PM Perfecto! I am blowing you kisses off the edge of my fingers. Trixie is kicking her feet in the air with glee that you have gotten into the mind of one of those. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2019 4:48:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comment, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. Date: 3/25/2019 8:29:00 AM You've nailed it Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/25/2019 8:38:00 AM - Thank you very much, Allen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/24/2019 4:29:00 PM eerie and yet marvelously penned, anne... you have a thriller here..... happy huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/25/2019 1:14:00 AM - Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Hagy Date: 3/24/2019 3:45:00 PM Interesting title!... I guess I can't be phycho then, cause I sure know how to cry :0... powerful, scary, and unfortunately true...nice job! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/25/2019 8:39:00 AM - Thank you very much, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 3/24/2019 3:42:00 PM oh gosh Anne Lise its so rare to see you move over to the dark side, the imagery is so chilling it must be unfortunate to meet someone with a psychopathic tendencies:-( hugs jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/25/2019 8:40:00 AM - I have some "dark moments", Jan :))) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/24/2019 2:27:00 PM Evil man he is..amazing how a psychotic mind works..best for a win, Anne-Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/24/2019 2:54:00 PM - A psychopath is a human being who is deprived of all human traits, such as love, empathy, conscience and reflection .... scary to think of ... it can be anyone - Many thanks Vijay, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus Date: 3/24/2019 2:11:00 PM Your title drew me in, Anne-Lise, and I was definitely not disappointed!Now,for some reason I keep looking over my shoulder! Hugs // paul Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/24/2019 2:44:00 PM - A few weeks ago we had an ax murder here in our little town, Paul - He killed a lady who visited the family's tomb (at daytime ) - With an 8-year old boy who witnessed ... so cruel and shocking ! - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/24/2019 1:26:00 PM You stood up to the challenge by creating such a thunderous poem dearest, Anne-Lise ! Hugs xxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/24/2019 2:49:00 PM - Many thanks for your friendly visit and wonderful comment my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Castellenas Date: 3/24/2019 1:24:00 PM Wow. You said everything needed in so few words. A outstanding poem. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/24/2019 2:31:00 PM - Many thanks for the first comment, John ... always interesting and exciting to hear what others think about my poems :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)