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Her thoughts rolls as a high-speed rail with the sound of heartbeat and pumping pulses He has planned a murder down to the last detail without a hint of guilty conscience - leaves no trace 24.03.2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Writing Challenge 5 Four Lines - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Dear Heart 3rd place in the contest

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Date: 9/11/2019 9:19:00 PM
Another great and dark masterpiece well done ~ Matt
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Date: 9/13/2019 4:16:00 AM
- I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, Phatt :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/29/2019 5:53:00 PM
Annie-Lise, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderfully penned piece, very dark and deep !
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Date: 3/30/2019 3:58:00 PM
- You have great contest, D.H. ... many thanks for my place on your winning list :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/27/2019 3:34:00 PM
here to greet you congrats, anne... happy huggs
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Date: 3/28/2019 4:25:00 AM
- Many thanks for the congrats, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/27/2019 2:50:00 PM
Excellent poem Anne-Lise, a great dark read. :)
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Date: 3/27/2019 2:57:00 PM
- Many thanks Gary, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/25/2019 10:32:00 PM
Sometimes even silent ones leave a trace!!!
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Date: 3/26/2019 4:49:00 AM
- Many thanks Arthur, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/25/2019 9:33:00 PM
Perfecto! I am blowing you kisses off the edge of my fingers. Trixie is kicking her feet in the air with glee that you have gotten into the mind of one of those.
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Date: 3/26/2019 4:48:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and lovely comment, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/25/2019 8:29:00 AM
You've nailed it
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Date: 3/25/2019 8:38:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Allen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/24/2019 4:29:00 PM
eerie and yet marvelously penned, anne... you have a thriller here..... happy huggs
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Date: 3/25/2019 1:14:00 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/24/2019 3:45:00 PM
Interesting title!... I guess I can't be phycho then, cause I sure know how to cry :0... powerful, scary, and unfortunately true...nice job!
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Date: 3/25/2019 8:39:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/24/2019 3:42:00 PM
oh gosh Anne Lise its so rare to see you move over to the dark side, the imagery is so chilling it must be unfortunate to meet someone with a psychopathic tendencies:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/25/2019 8:40:00 AM
- I have some "dark moments", Jan :))) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/24/2019 2:27:00 PM
Evil man he is..amazing how a psychotic mind works..best for a win, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 3/24/2019 2:54:00 PM
- A psychopath is a human being who is deprived of all human traits, such as love, empathy, conscience and reflection .... scary to think of ... it can be anyone - Many thanks Vijay, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/24/2019 2:11:00 PM
Your title drew me in, Anne-Lise, and I was definitely not disappointed!Now,for some reason I keep looking over my shoulder! Hugs // paul
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Date: 3/24/2019 2:44:00 PM
- A few weeks ago we had an ax murder here in our little town, Paul - He killed a lady who visited the family's tomb (at daytime ) - With an 8-year old boy who witnessed ... so cruel and shocking ! - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/24/2019 1:26:00 PM
You stood up to the challenge by creating such a thunderous poem dearest, Anne-Lise ! Hugs xxx
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Date: 3/24/2019 2:49:00 PM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and wonderful comment my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/24/2019 1:24:00 PM
Wow. You said everything needed in so few words. A outstanding poem.
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Date: 3/24/2019 2:31:00 PM
- Many thanks for the first comment, John ... always interesting and exciting to hear what others think about my poems :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)