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- the Princess of the Sea -

On the beach I found a seashell luster of colors mixed with gold illuminate Washed by the sea millions of times tides turn as gentle footprints remain I sit and ponder, how could it happen salt breeze within an ocean's breath inhales A journey of unimaginable time drifting murmurs echo against waves crashing In the sunlight it shone with many shades satin pearl treasure heart between two shells Carefully I opened and found its soul it was then as one on whitewashed wings we flew free I found a beautiful princess of the sea Upon a sigh or dream revealed its inner secret A Collaborated Poem Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 15.05.2016 (unrhymed couplets)

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/30/2016 2:33:00 PM

- Thank you my friend Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Red Fiery

Date: 5/29/2016 8:37:00 PM

This is just fantastic...I love the way you both collaborate ...perfect 7/7 and a fav..:))))~Red

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 5/29/2016 5:32:00 PM

Hi Liam n' Anne- Lise!:))Wow!!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + !A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Jan Allison

Date: 5/29/2016 4:57:00 PM

absolutely stunning imagery Liam and Anne lise yet another delightful collaboration:-) hugs Jan xx