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- the Black Mamba -

The dark factor ... copying and distorting the truth
                                           - Black Mamba -
                               when it bites, it bites several times

                                 Moral and questionable behavior
                                        An unscrupulous thief
                             
                         ... regret, provides the opportunity for change
                             your profit is of little value or significance








18/08/2019
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Phyllis Babcock Date: 8/26/2019 11:30:00 AM Caught my eye this poem did as I dislike those slimy things and yes we have those slimy humans who fit this as well. love phyl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/26/2019 11:40:00 AM - "Slimy humans" are not easy to avoid, Phyllis ... but Black Mamba: the chance to meet it, is very small :) - Many thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 8/21/2019 4:03:00 AM The most venomous, dark, sinister, deadly poisonous creature alive - but there are humans who would also fit this description - wonderful clever write but despicable creatures all of them. Hugs, Jenny. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/21/2019 11:41:00 AM - A human, disguised as a poisonous snake ... we all know one or more, dear sister Jenny :) - Many thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams Date: 8/19/2019 6:11:00 PM What an ugly creature this is, great to use for a metaphor it bears a striking resemblance to some who have crossed my life’s path! Good write :) hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/21/2019 11:37:00 AM - One we can never trust ... it is not only ugly .... it is wicked, Sandra - Many thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/19/2019 4:05:00 PM enjoying the touch of mystery within this fascinating piece, anne... don't ever come close to this mamba! ...happy huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/21/2019 11:34:00 AM - Luckily no Mamba in Norway, Nette :) - Many thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 8/19/2019 3:55:00 PM Deep and compelling, Anne-Lise. What a horrible creature the black mamba is. (Had to look it up. Thought it was an insect, but it's a snake.) Predators who bite "several times" are especially frightening though this snake's venom could do the trick with one bite. Awesome work, Anne Lise! Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/21/2019 11:33:00 AM - A nasty snake, Carolyn :) - Many thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green Date: 8/19/2019 12:54:00 PM That was really cool, Very creepy indeed. Nicely done. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/20/2019 3:31:00 AM - Thank you very much, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Foster Date: 8/19/2019 8:58:00 AM Wow. words more fierce than the picture that is really scary and darkly beautiful all at the same time. Wonderful write. Ann Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/19/2019 1:51:00 PM - Thank you very much, Ann :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin Date: 8/19/2019 4:32:00 AM A great one Anne-Lise, let's hope something bites our plagiarizer! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/19/2019 8:27:00 AM - Whoever bites, Tania ... probably gets hurt in the teeth ... :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios Date: 8/19/2019 3:56:00 AM Yesm heard about this! And we go on, right! Have a creative week. Panagiota, Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/19/2019 8:22:00 AM - ... yes, we move on ... life is short, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 8/18/2019 1:49:00 PM Love how you done this Anne, last I heard he'd been booted off the site. Tom Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/18/2019 1:53:00 PM - No one knows where the bunny jumps next time, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One Date: 8/18/2019 1:24:00 PM The snake or the drug? Both horrid.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/18/2019 1:48:00 PM - Both, S.O. ... it was not completely finished ... hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael Date: 8/18/2019 1:15:00 PM A very dangerous one indeed...but not as deadly as the copiers or distorter s Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/19/2019 8:27:00 AM ...if provoked ! :) Arturo Michael Date: 8/18/2019 2:32:00 PM It can run you down and go up to 4 ft or more...injecting large amounts of venom...for sure it's deadly...if provoked Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/18/2019 1:50:00 PM - Black Mamba's bite is very dangerous ... often leads to death, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)