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My impulsivity gives me a lesson For a long time the words in me have been quiet they embrace me on all sides, I do not hear While the ghosts dance gracefully in the shadows // I'm not without sin _ feel my cold skin Oh, the fear breaks in // A tone in the devil's treacherous symphony So beautiful that I dared to open up to him His split tongue and poisonous liar This shady evening, that led me into the depths // I'm not without sin _ feel my cold skin Oh, so deep within // I do not think the water can be turned into wine It's simplest, is often the most sensible I pray that the fall height will not be so painful Forgive me, I have lived in sin and without meaning // I'm not without sin _ feel my cold skin Oh, where have you been // Daylight comes, the blood pulsates in the veins In frustration and ruthless pain I have to deal with my previous choices and hope that miracles seek my salvation // I'm not without sin _ feel my warm skin Oh, what a beautiful day // 01/09/2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved - Lyric 2 - Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh 2nd place in the contest

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Date: 9/24/2020 5:45:00 PM
Nice win with these dazzling lyrics, Sunny! Congrats on your win today. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 9/25/2020 2:08:00 AM
- Many thanks for the visit and congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/24/2020 3:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win in this contest, Anne-Lise!!
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Date: 9/25/2020 2:07:00 AM
- Many thanks for the visit and congratulations, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/24/2020 2:39:00 PM
A mesmerizing write, Anne-Lise:-) Splendid imagery! Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest
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Date: 9/25/2020 2:06:00 AM
- Many thanks for my place on your contest list, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/17/2020 10:35:00 AM
This is poetry dear Poet. I liked the energy and how you made the words come alive to the reader. Outstanding poetry. The reader understood every word.
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Date: 9/20/2020 1:54:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/5/2020 7:43:00 PM
Great lyrics and well written. love phyl
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Date: 9/6/2020 2:07:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your support and your comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/2/2020 1:40:00 PM
Mad lyrics my friend!
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Date: 9/6/2020 2:07:00 AM
- Many thanks S.O., for visiting and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/2/2020 11:02:00 AM
This is excellent Anne-Lise.\ Love it. So much emotion and the picture s perfect. Well Done.\ God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/6/2020 2:06:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/2/2020 7:21:00 AM
A very cool picture to accompany this piece.
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Date: 9/2/2020 11:20:00 AM
... cool :)
Date: 9/2/2020 7:20:00 AM
Exceptional. My vote for POTD! Hugs Rick.
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Date: 9/2/2020 11:20:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your support and your comments, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/2/2020 5:08:00 AM
Lovely lyrics, Anne-Lise..awesome line; ..I do not think the water can be turned into wine ..It's simplest, is often the most sensible. All the best
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Date: 9/2/2020 5:16:00 AM
- Vijat, many thanks for your words ... appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/2/2020 4:38:00 AM
A great lyric, Anne-Lise!! Smooth; pleasing music!!
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Date: 9/2/2020 5:15:00 AM
- Many thanks Newton, for visiting and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/1/2020 8:56:00 PM
Classic poetry, beautifully written.
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Date: 9/2/2020 2:22:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your valuable comments, Harry :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/1/2020 4:10:00 PM
A wonderful write...structure and message too...Well done
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Date: 9/2/2020 2:21:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your support and your comments, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/1/2020 3:01:00 PM
Your contrition is expressed so clearly and poignantly, Sunshine. I'm sure you have been forgiven. None of us is without sin. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 9/2/2020 2:21:00 AM
- No no one is without sin ... many thanks for your words ... appreciate your comments, Caolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/1/2020 2:26:00 PM
Wonderful lines, Anne-Lise, and the perfect picture to accompany them.
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Date: 9/2/2020 2:19:00 AM
- Glad you liked it Jenna, many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/1/2020 1:29:00 PM
An amazing write Anne, I wish you good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 9/2/2020 2:17:00 AM
- Tom, thank you very much for your valuable comments :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/1/2020 1:00:00 PM
WOW Sis!!!
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Date: 9/2/2020 2:16:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your support and your WOW comments, Bobby :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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