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- Tempted To Madness -

My impulsivity gives me a lesson
For a long time the words in me have been quiet
they embrace me on all sides, I do not hear
While the ghosts dance gracefully in the shadows

// I'm not without sin
  _ feel my cold skin
Oh, the fear breaks in //

A tone in the devil's treacherous symphony
So beautiful that I dared to open up to him
His split tongue and poisonous liar
This shady evening, that led me into the depths

// I'm not without sin
  _ feel my cold skin
Oh, so deep within //

I do not think the water can be turned into wine
It's simplest, is often the most sensible
I pray that the fall height will not be so painful
Forgive me, I have lived in sin and without meaning

// I'm not without sin
  _ feel my cold skin
Oh, where have you been //

Daylight comes, the blood pulsates in the veins
In frustration and ruthless pain
I have to deal with my previous choices
and hope that miracles seek my salvation

// I'm not without sin
 _ feel my warm skin
Oh, what a beautiful day //






01/09/2020
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- Lyric 2 - Poetry Contest -
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
2nd place in the contest

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John Watt Date: 9/24/2020 5:45:00 PM Nice win with these dazzling lyrics, Sunny! Congrats on your win today. Hugs ~ John Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/25/2020 2:08:00 AM - Many thanks for the visit and congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera Date: 9/24/2020 3:27:00 PM Congratulations on your great win in this contest, Anne-Lise!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/25/2020 2:07:00 AM - Many thanks for the visit and congratulations, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ibeh Date: 9/24/2020 2:39:00 PM A mesmerizing write, Anne-Lise:-) Splendid imagery! Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/25/2020 2:06:00 AM - Many thanks for my place on your contest list, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Castellenas Date: 9/17/2020 10:35:00 AM This is poetry dear Poet. I liked the energy and how you made the words come alive to the reader. Outstanding poetry. The reader understood every word. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/20/2020 1:54:00 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comments, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/5/2020 7:43:00 PM Great lyrics and well written. love phyl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/6/2020 2:07:00 AM - Thank you very much for your support and your comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One Date: 9/2/2020 1:40:00 PM Mad lyrics my friend! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/6/2020 2:07:00 AM - Many thanks S.O., for visiting and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball Date: 9/2/2020 11:02:00 AM This is excellent Anne-Lise.\ Love it. So much emotion and the picture s perfect. Well Done.\ God Bless, JB Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/6/2020 2:06:00 AM - Thank you very much for your comments, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/2/2020 7:21:00 AM A very cool picture to accompany this piece. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/2/2020 11:20:00 AM ... cool :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/2/2020 7:20:00 AM Exceptional. My vote for POTD! Hugs Rick. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/2/2020 11:20:00 AM - Thank you very much for your support and your comments, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/2/2020 5:08:00 AM Lovely lyrics, Anne-Lise..awesome line; ..I do not think the water can be turned into wine ..It's simplest, is often the most sensible. All the best Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/2/2020 5:16:00 AM - Vijat, many thanks for your words ... appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera Date: 9/2/2020 4:38:00 AM A great lyric, Anne-Lise!! Smooth; pleasing music!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/2/2020 5:15:00 AM - Many thanks Newton, for visiting and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman Date: 9/1/2020 8:56:00 PM Classic poetry, beautifully written. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/2/2020 2:22:00 AM - Thank you very much for your valuable comments, Harry :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael Date: 9/1/2020 4:10:00 PM A wonderful write...structure and message too...Well done Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/2/2020 2:21:00 AM - Thank you very much for your support and your comments, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/1/2020 3:01:00 PM Your contrition is expressed so clearly and poignantly, Sunshine. I'm sure you have been forgiven. None of us is without sin. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/2/2020 2:21:00 AM - No no one is without sin ... many thanks for your words ... appreciate your comments, Caolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan Date: 9/1/2020 2:26:00 PM Wonderful lines, Anne-Lise, and the perfect picture to accompany them. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/2/2020 2:19:00 AM - Glad you liked it Jenna, many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 9/1/2020 1:29:00 PM An amazing write Anne, I wish you good luck in the contest. Tom Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/2/2020 2:17:00 AM - Tom, thank you very much for your valuable comments :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May Date: 9/1/2020 1:00:00 PM WOW Sis!!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/2/2020 2:16:00 AM - Thank you very much for your support and your WOW comments, Bobby :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)