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Many waters cannot quench LOVE, Neither can the floods drown it. Song of Solomon 8:7

As the winds breathe heavily darkened within fury Moaning filled with clouds begins speaking Through stormy turbulent assaults with waves that kill A ballad is blown away like feathers from angels wings Rain falling heavily driven by natures unyielding force Trees bend to salute the host's almighty anger Hurricane's orchestra romancing chaos turns Striking tempest flashing lightening power of creation speaks Rumbling voices roaring echoes carried from the heaven's The action and power of love both earthly and heavenly Crackling forks sparking separating inside an air like music dawns Floods flow down a neck chain around the mountain's face Rushing to an ocean's source where it's kissed by the salt of grace Washed in a seabed finding her resting place safe inside an oyster Enormous waves sad and monotonous, which eventually dies A collaborated poem Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 14.09. 2017 tristich unrhymed Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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D.W. Rodgers

Date: 2/25/2020 2:32:00 PM

A seamless collaboration -well done Anne-Lise

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 2/26/2018 12:24:00 PM

A pearl of a poem, Anne-Lise and Liam! Such powerful imagery of the splendor and awe of God's command over nature. Great collab poetry by you two talented pens. Love and joy always.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/26/2018 12:43:00 PM

- Many thanks for visit and lovely comment, Freddie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/16/2017 4:06:00 PM

What a wonderful collaboration Anne Lise and Liam I especially love the powerful imagery and like the thought of the tree saluting the hosts almighty anger. You write so beautifully together my friends and its a joy to read your poem today:-) hugs jan

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/16/2017 4:21:00 PM

- Glad you enjoyed our co-writing, my friend Jan :) - A pleasure to write with Liam - Many thanks for visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/16/2017 3:49:00 PM

you are both on a roll with this picturesque write...love the lyrical wave of words, anne.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/16/2017 4:19:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/16/2017 9:14:00 AM

Interesting work..I can't tell where one ends and the other begins..Great job..I enjoyed reading this one today..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/16/2017 2:49:00 PM

- Glad you enjoyed our co-writing, Sara :) - Many thanks for visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 9/15/2017 8:51:00 AM

What an awesome collab, Liam is a great poet like you.. great imagery in your write..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2017 12:00:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 9/15/2017 6:28:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, A marvelous and superb collaboration here by two of my favorite poets!! "Striking Fear Home" is the perfect title for this passionate and powerfully written Tristich. And the added touch with the posted picture is perfect. A definite FAVE in my book!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2017 11:59:00 AM

- Glad you enjoyed our co-writing, my friend Gary :) - Many thanks for visit a fave and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams

Date: 9/15/2017 6:06:00 AM

Oh Wow, a wonderful collaboration, well done you two Liam and Anne-Lise...Maria xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2017 11:59:00 AM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Loughman

Date: 9/14/2017 9:26:00 PM

Excellent cowrite! Congratulations to you both!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2017 11:56:00 AM

- Many thanks for visit and lovely comment, Donna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 9/14/2017 6:57:00 PM

Very timely for this Texan. I remember a church choir anthem by this name. Thank you for the memory!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2017 11:55:00 AM

- Sunlite, many thanks for visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

Date: 9/14/2017 6:11:00 PM

"Floods flow down a neck chain around the mountain's face " My favourite line. Well done to you both.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2017 11:55:00 AM

- Many thanks for visit and lovely comment, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/14/2017 4:39:00 PM

A collaboration of beauty, a poetic storm of superb writing! Congratulations to both: Anne-Lise and Liam, Liam and Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2017 7:24:00 AM

- Glad you enjoyed our co-writing, dear Demetrios :) - Many thanks for visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/14/2017 3:29:00 PM

also i would like to thank everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments bless you all

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2017 7:23:00 AM

X X :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/14/2017 3:26:00 PM

this was a pleasure joining ink with you anne lise your pen shone through diamond dear pal wishing you a blessed week ahead

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2017 2:34:00 AM

- U 2, Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/14/2017 3:11:00 PM

wow, again you and liam create a sensational work well woven, anne... ha!ppy huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2017 7:22:00 AM

- Nette, many thanks for visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/14/2017 1:22:00 PM

I haven't done a collaboration in a long time...maybe someone would like to do one with me? Your write is incredible my friend! I surely loved reading your delightfully powerful poem here this afternoon! What an amazing piece, you both did an awesome job! Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2017 7:22:00 AM

- A big thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Russell :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Old Man Emu

Date: 9/14/2017 1:07:00 PM

Well done! Enjoyed this co-joined theme, very inspiring. Kind Regards, Craig

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2017 2:32:00 AM

- Glad you enjoyed our co-writing, Craig :) - Many thanks for visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/14/2017 12:56:00 PM

A well written depiction of storm--and the power of love--well done Anne-Lise and Liam!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2017 1:20:00 PM

- Glad you enjoyed our co-writing - Many thanks for the first comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)