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18.03.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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                                                  Whistling
                                             winter keeps us
                                          silent.Cold moments
                                         turn into bright yellow 
                                         buttons along the path.
                                     The coltsfoot has flourished.
                                 A few insects are beginning to stir.
                                  Honeycombs stick sweetly in the 
                                  mouth. Changing surfaces, when 
                                 spring breaks.Makes your stomach
                                  tingle with hypersensitive details 
                                    in this sonnet's time.Everyday
                                      emotions rainbow painted
                                            an verdure sheen,
                                              overwhelming
                                                excitement
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Peter Dome

Date: 3/21/2024 1:46:00 PM

Wow so beautiful, eloquent and clever. Your. The use of language is sublime. What unrivalled talent that has such an inspirational and charm. A favourite. Well done. Made my day. Pete.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/21/2024 5:58:00 AM

Anne-Lise, I am always amazed at how you celebrate nature, spring, and flowers. The juxtaposition of characters is lovely. I think it's all awesome.