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        ~ so heavenly beautiful ~ I don't like it ~ makes my poems fade ~










04/01/2020
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Who Flips your Trolley Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Bobby May
Monoku : 16 syllables
2nd place in the contest
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Date: 6/5/2020 8:58:00 PM
Your poetry can never fade very far dear heart xo
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Date: 1/27/2020 8:16:00 AM
Great take on the contest, Anne-Lise. Many congrats on your win! hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/27/2020 8:26:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/27/2020 5:25:00 AM
They will never fade, because they are written from the heart ...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/27/2020 6:13:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/26/2020 11:07:00 PM
Anne-Lise, beautiful, congratulations on your win _Constance
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/27/2020 6:12:00 AM
- Many thanks Constanse, for your visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/26/2020 3:39:00 PM
Nobody here makes our poems fade, Anne Lise. By your participation here alone, you are famous and by your poems, you will always be remembered. I really like the humbleness in your one-liner. Congrats on the win.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/27/2020 6:12:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/26/2020 1:04:00 PM
Good one, Anne-Lise. CONGRATS! Janice
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/27/2020 6:11:00 AM
- Many thanks Janice, for your visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/26/2020 8:10:00 AM
back to say congratulations...i loved your original take on the contest... hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/27/2020 6:11:00 AM
- Many thanks Sandra, for your visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/15/2020 3:48:00 AM
Hi Anne-Marie my dear friend, this is a unique write and will definately be a win in the contest. Well Penned Sunshine Smile, Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/16/2020 6:39:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/15/2020 12:08:00 AM
Anne-Lise, I think every writer has another writer so admired and respected that makes us wonder if we should keep picking up our pen. And yet we do! Thanks for the lovely write ~ John
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/16/2020 6:39:00 AM
- Thank you very much, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/13/2020 10:51:00 PM
Cleverly written.. Good luck in the contest..
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/16/2020 6:38:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Jenish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/8/2020 2:35:00 PM
I love this entry, Sunshine! I like it more since you didn't mention the poet's name. Best wishes in Bobby's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/16/2020 6:37:00 AM
- Thank you very much, dear Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/7/2020 12:27:00 PM
Your poems are wonderful my friend . love phyl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2020 12:33:00 PM
- Many thanks Phyllis, for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/5/2020 11:24:00 PM
Anne-Lise, I love this, a FAV _ Constance
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2020 8:24:00 AM
- Really appreciate your "fave", many thanks Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/5/2020 12:54:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, so why don;t you like it? have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/5/2020 5:43:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, I hope you win the contest. Have a nice evening my friend. Hugs Darlene
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2020 1:00:00 PM
- I'm terribly envious, Darlene :))) - .... why aren't my poems more beautiful than hers ... No, dear Darlene ... I'm not envious of anyone ... this is just written for fun and for the contest :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/5/2020 8:26:00 AM
I wonder who she is... Soupmail
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2020 12:53:00 PM
- She's a secret :))) - Thank you very much, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/5/2020 7:38:00 AM
Sandra said it perfect, your poems can't fade....they are wonderful! Best wishes in the contest Anne-Lise. Hugs Charlie
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2020 12:55:00 PM
- You are good and kind, my friend Charlie :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/4/2020 9:53:00 PM
"she" could never make your poems fade, because "you" write beautifully my friend...i like this...best wishes in the contest... hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2020 12:51:00 PM
- Many thanks for the wonderful and sweet comment, my friend Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/4/2020 8:44:00 PM
Lovely monoku Anne...hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2020 12:50:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/4/2020 5:17:00 PM
Hello~ love this Monoku Panagiota
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2020 12:49:00 PM
- Hello ... many thanks for your lovely comment, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/4/2020 2:45:00 PM
Cleverly done, Anne-Lise! All the best.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/4/2020 3:23:00 PM
- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/4/2020 12:52:00 PM
Apotheosis of humility dearest, Anne-Lise! Marvelously done! Good luck! Hugs xxx
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/5/2020 5:43:00 AM
Understood that but still...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/4/2020 12:56:00 PM
- There is no "she" that makes me envious ... just for fun and the contest, my friend :) - Many thanks for the wonderful comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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