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Dusk feels suffocating Moon shadows From flowering to dust A race against death No bluebells on meadow The stars are resting and angels smiling   A journey through darkness Where are the fireflies with their yellow hands One last deep breath The cold does not hide the truth Wordless at the grave ... Wing beat of a bird breaks the silence 19.02.2017 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 3/17/2017 6:04:00 AM
I felt so moved by these words of yours, a true talent Anne-Lise, so well penned.
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Date: 3/17/2017 7:56:00 AM
- Maria, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/1/2017 2:04:00 AM
I can hear the silence...
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Date: 3/1/2017 3:15:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and comments, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/23/2017 4:24:00 PM
A fast richness spreads over all here, Anne-Lise. Dusk, moon, dust, death, bluebells, meadow, stars. Cosmic!
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Date: 2/24/2017 3:00:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and comments, Doug :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/22/2017 12:28:00 PM
Beautifully written. Congrats for POTD
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Date: 2/22/2017 12:35:00 PM
- Thanks for congratulations, Jannie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/22/2017 8:02:00 AM
Oooh chilling...well penned Sun :)
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Date: 2/22/2017 12:35:00 PM
- Sunita, many thanks for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/22/2017 5:08:00 AM
I love that you added into your magnificent imagery the place where you were joined. This is so lovely and worthy of being honored for POTD! Congratulations to you Freddie. 7 :)
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Date: 2/22/2017 12:34:00 PM
....... a 7, Freddie :)))
Date: 2/22/2017 5:05:00 AM
A very moving piece Anne-Lise. Congratulations on having it honored at POTD! ; )
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Date: 2/22/2017 12:33:00 PM
- Thanks for congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/22/2017 3:49:00 AM
Dark but I like your description, Anne-lise:) congratulations on your POTD:)
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Date: 2/22/2017 12:33:00 PM
- Thanks for congratulations, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/22/2017 1:38:00 AM
Interesting poem.... congrats on being chosen...
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Date: 2/22/2017 12:32:00 PM
- Thanks for congratulations, Bernard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/21/2017 5:52:00 PM
My kind of theme here, well done Anne-Lise.
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Date: 2/22/2017 12:36:00 PM
- Rob, many thanks for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/21/2017 2:53:00 PM
Congratulations Anne-Lise on this dark yet brilliant piece. An outstanding well done piece :)
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Date: 2/22/2017 12:32:00 PM
- Thanks for congratulations, Akkina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/21/2017 1:43:00 PM
..back to say congratulations on POTD Anne-Lise! I am so happy for you :-) blessings,, lynn
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Date: 2/22/2017 12:31:00 PM
- Thanks for congratulations, Lynn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/21/2017 1:37:00 PM
A well deserved POTD Miss Anne-Lise. A vivid description.
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Date: 2/22/2017 12:31:00 PM
- Thanks for congratulations, Donna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/21/2017 1:32:00 PM
A perceptive poem on an unpleasant subject, death. Powerful poetry. Kudos for POTD. You tackled a hard topic w/courage and grace. Loved the poem too. Love and more love to you, dear.
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Date: 2/22/2017 12:30:00 PM
- Thanks for congratulations and love, Freddie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/21/2017 7:44:00 AM
Back to say congratulations on POTD Anne Lise:)
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Date: 2/21/2017 7:58:00 AM
- An honor and pleasure :) - Thanks for congratulations, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/21/2017 6:58:00 AM
Truly poignant and solid, really loved the ending too, well done. im new here so it was nice to see this, found you through POTD, congratulations.
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Date: 2/21/2017 7:58:00 AM
- Nice to meet you, Carlton :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit, congrats and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/21/2017 6:54:00 AM
Serene :) congrats on potd lovely Sunshine! xomo
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Date: 2/21/2017 7:56:00 AM
- Thanks for congratulations, Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/21/2017 6:48:00 AM
Back to congratulate you for POTD honors Anne-Lise...
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Date: 2/21/2017 7:56:00 AM
- An honor and pleasure :) - Thanks for congratulations, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/21/2017 6:42:00 AM
Great imagery! Congrats on POTD, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 2/21/2017 6:44:00 AM
- Many thanks Agnes, for your friendly visit, congrats and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/21/2017 3:25:00 AM
Brilliant Anne-Lise, your amazing versatility when writing poetry is astounding and inspirational, from humour to dark, congratulations on POTD well deserved.
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Date: 2/21/2017 3:36:00 AM
- A surprising and pleasant news :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit, congrats and lovely comments, Roy - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/20/2017 4:22:00 PM
Great poetic imagery and the feelings are well conveyed, Anne Lise. May I suggest that you change "where is the fireflies..." to "where are the fireflies..."? Just a grammatical suggestion...peace :)
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Date: 2/21/2017 2:59:00 AM
- Many thanks for your help ... much appreciated it, Laura :) - (next time ... I prefer a S- mail) - Thanks for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/20/2017 1:39:00 AM
I love the dark imagery of this wonderful write! :)) Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/20/2017 4:26:00 AM
- Rhonda, many thanks for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/19/2017 10:28:00 PM
WoW! There is such a finality here. I like a poem with a message and this has a good one. Live each moment as though it were your last. It very well might be. Well done. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/20/2017 4:25:00 AM
- Words we all should think and live by, Judy - "Live each moment as though it were your last" - Many thanks for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/19/2017 9:45:00 PM
A haunting piece, beautifully written. So few words with great emotional impact. A pleasure to read :-) blessings, lynn
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Date: 2/20/2017 4:23:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comments, Lynn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/19/2017 9:02:00 PM
Silence says a lot. RIP
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Date: 2/20/2017 4:22:00 AM
- Yes, quite right Ali ... silence says a lot - Many thanks for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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