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* * Under the red umbrella The young and beautiful Annabella Small rain drops with shades of blue A lovely memory to remember with you The rain that came from above was pure love Love, honesty and respect what we always expect This summer's night our first kiss goodnight The way we feel always real * * * 02.11.2018 Sun :) A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved The Red Umbrella Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper 1st place in the contest

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John Castellenas

Date: 4/30/2019 11:45:00 AM

Wonderful poetry for the kiss. I did enjoy.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/1/2019 2:06:00 PM

- Glad you enjoy my poem, John :) - Many thanks for your comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/19/2018 6:06:00 PM

A very cute love poem inside a heart, Anne-Lise! Well-done, and congrats on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2018 12:25:00 PM

- Many thanks for your congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carole Duet

Date: 11/17/2018 2:37:00 PM

What a lovely and sweet poem! Great imagery. And, congrats on your win! :D

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/17/2018 2:39:00 PM

- Glad you enjoy my poem, Carole :) - Many thanks for your comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/17/2018 1:02:00 PM

what a beautiful romantic poem and you have created a wonderful heart shape:-) many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/17/2018 1:26:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 11/15/2018 4:18:00 PM

Congrats on your win Anne..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2018 2:03:00 AM

- Many thanks for your congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 11/13/2018 11:07:00 PM

Thank you for entering my contest, Sunshine, you had everything I was looking for. Your shape poems have always fascinated me. Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2018 2:06:00 PM

- A pleasure to attend your contest, Eve - Thanks for my place on the winning list :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/13/2018 8:43:00 PM

This charming shape poem was a delight to read Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2018 2:08:00 PM

- Glad you enjoy my little heart poem, Connie :) - Many thanks for your comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Michaels

Date: 11/10/2018 12:00:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise. I really like the spirit and imagery captured in your words, here! The little heart-shape is a bonus!! Best of luck with the contest. Regards, John.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/12/2018 2:04:00 AM

- Glad you like it, John :) - Many thanks for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/6/2018 5:01:00 AM

anne lise truly excellent red umbrella how the rain falls from above sparkled down in your pen wishing you a blessed week dear friend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2018 7:55:00 AM

- Many thanks for your valuable comment, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/5/2018 12:35:00 PM

This is such a beautiful take on the photo Anne-Lise! Romantic and sweet! Happy Monday xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/5/2018 12:40:00 PM

- Glad you like it, Mike :) - Many thanks for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/5/2018 12:17:00 PM

Hi Sunshine, An awesome poem, which sends tingles down my spine remembering my first kiss! A great write - congratulations. xoxo, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/5/2018 12:29:00 PM

- It must have been a bit of a kiss, Jennifer :))) - Many thanks for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 11/5/2018 10:59:00 AM

What can be better than the memory of your first kiss? And you have explained the situation so well, it was a really lovely poem and I absolutely love reading it, I wish you best of luck in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/5/2018 12:26:00 PM

- A sweet thing to remember, Faraz :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/4/2018 4:43:00 PM

No greater memory then the night of our first kiss, you say it with love in your heart, a winner by far S. S. hope all is well, sending you a hug

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/5/2018 12:25:00 PM

- I have read so many beautiful poems for this contest, Pixie .... it will be difficult for Eve to "choose winners" ... in my eyes all are winners :) - Many thanks for your good words and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/4/2018 11:32:00 AM

Ah, Sunshine, what a lovely "first kiss." Perhaps you also had to change your poem to a rhyme form, and it works beautifully. Love the Heart shape as well. Sending winning wishes your way. Hugs, Carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/4/2018 11:40:00 AM

- No, it became a new poem Carolyn ... I'm not good to rhyme in English :) - Many thanks for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/4/2018 9:53:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, see the write has changed, and what an anazing change it is, to rhyme. An excellent new poem The Contest). I feel that this write will do well in the contest, good luck. I did wonder if you would change the original. This is an excellent write, the words paint such beautiful imagery in such a gentle song. A journey through your words is like a journey through the stars, Heavenly. A fave Anne-Lise. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/4/2018 11:42:00 AM

- I had it in my mind, Mike ... but chose to write a new poem ... a bit shorter :) - Many thanks for your valuable fav. and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/3/2018 4:53:00 PM

Reads like winning material. Enjoyed reading your romantic work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/4/2018 6:29:00 AM

- Many thanks Sara, for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 11/3/2018 4:50:00 PM

Beautiful write Anne...Gl in the contest..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/4/2018 6:29:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/3/2018 12:33:00 PM

Lovely romantic poem that makes the heart beat widely each time the lips meet! Excellent dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/4/2018 6:26:00 AM

- Glad you like it, Demetrios :) - Many thanks for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/3/2018 12:44:00 AM

Each one so far different, amazing how we all interpret the picture.I thought not many words rhyme with umbrella but you found one, who can ever not remember that first kiss. Good luck. Tom.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/4/2018 6:28:00 AM

- Many beautiful poems and all different ... but the same starting point :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)