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- Our First Kiss -

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                                  Under the            red umbrella
                               The young and beautiful Annabella
                              Small rain drops with shades of blue
                            A lovely memory to remember with you

                                  The rain that came from above
                                              was pure love
                                     Love, honesty and respect
                                      what we always expect

                                         This summer's night
                                       our first kiss goodnight
                                           The way we feel
                                               always real
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02.11.2018
Sun :) A-L Andresen :)
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The Red Umbrella Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Eve Roper

1st place in the contest

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2018

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John Castellenas Date: 4/30/2019 11:45:00 AM Wonderful poetry for the kiss. I did enjoy. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/1/2019 2:06:00 PM - Glad you enjoy my poem, John :) - Many thanks for your comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight Date: 11/19/2018 6:06:00 PM A very cute love poem inside a heart, Anne-Lise! Well-done, and congrats on your win! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/20/2018 12:25:00 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carole Duet Date: 11/17/2018 2:37:00 PM What a lovely and sweet poem! Great imagery. And, congrats on your win! :D Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/17/2018 2:39:00 PM - Glad you enjoy my poem, Carole :) - Many thanks for your comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 11/17/2018 1:02:00 PM what a beautiful romantic poem and you have created a wonderful heart shape:-) many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/17/2018 1:26:00 PM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 11/15/2018 4:18:00 PM Congrats on your win Anne.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/16/2018 2:03:00 AM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 11/13/2018 11:07:00 PM Thank you for entering my contest, Sunshine, you had everything I was looking for. Your shape poems have always fascinated me. Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/14/2018 2:06:00 PM - A pleasure to attend your contest, Eve - Thanks for my place on the winning list :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 11/13/2018 8:43:00 PM This charming shape poem was a delight to read Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/14/2018 2:08:00 PM - Glad you enjoy my little heart poem, Connie :) - Many thanks for your comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Michaels Date: 11/10/2018 12:00:00 PM Hi Anne-Lise. I really like the spirit and imagery captured in your words, here! The little heart-shape is a bonus!! Best of luck with the contest. Regards, John. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/12/2018 2:04:00 AM - Glad you like it, John :) - Many thanks for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid Date: 11/6/2018 5:01:00 AM anne lise truly excellent red umbrella how the rain falls from above sparkled down in your pen wishing you a blessed week dear friend Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/6/2018 7:55:00 AM - Many thanks for your valuable comment, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile Date: 11/5/2018 12:35:00 PM This is such a beautiful take on the photo Anne-Lise! Romantic and sweet! Happy Monday xxoo Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/5/2018 12:40:00 PM - Glad you like it, Mike :) - Many thanks for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 11/5/2018 12:17:00 PM Hi Sunshine, An awesome poem, which sends tingles down my spine remembering my first kiss! A great write - congratulations. xoxo, Jennifer. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/5/2018 12:29:00 PM - It must have been a bit of a kiss, Jennifer :))) - Many thanks for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Faraz Ajmal Date: 11/5/2018 10:59:00 AM What can be better than the memory of your first kiss? And you have explained the situation so well, it was a really lovely poem and I absolutely love reading it, I wish you best of luck in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/5/2018 12:26:00 PM - A sweet thing to remember, Faraz :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 11/4/2018 4:43:00 PM No greater memory then the night of our first kiss, you say it with love in your heart, a winner by far S. S. hope all is well, sending you a hug Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/5/2018 12:25:00 PM - I have read so many beautiful poems for this contest, Pixie .... it will be difficult for Eve to "choose winners" ... in my eyes all are winners :) - Many thanks for your good words and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 11/4/2018 11:32:00 AM Ah, Sunshine, what a lovely "first kiss." Perhaps you also had to change your poem to a rhyme form, and it works beautifully. Love the Heart shape as well. Sending winning wishes your way. Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/4/2018 11:40:00 AM - No, it became a new poem Carolyn ... I'm not good to rhyme in English :) - Many thanks for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven Date: 11/4/2018 9:53:00 AM Hi Anne-Lise, see the write has changed, and what an anazing change it is, to rhyme. An excellent new poem The Contest). I feel that this write will do well in the contest, good luck. I did wonder if you would change the original. This is an excellent write, the words paint such beautiful imagery in such a gentle song. A journey through your words is like a journey through the stars, Heavenly. A fave Anne-Lise. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/4/2018 11:42:00 AM - I had it in my mind, Mike ... but chose to write a new poem ... a bit shorter :) - Many thanks for your valuable fav. and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/3/2018 4:53:00 PM Reads like winning material. Enjoyed reading your romantic work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/4/2018 6:29:00 AM - Many thanks Sara, for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 11/3/2018 4:50:00 PM Beautiful write Anne...Gl in the contest.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/4/2018 6:29:00 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 11/3/2018 12:33:00 PM Lovely romantic poem that makes the heart beat widely each time the lips meet! Excellent dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/4/2018 6:26:00 AM - Glad you like it, Demetrios :) - Many thanks for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 11/3/2018 12:44:00 AM Each one so far different, amazing how we all interpret the picture.I thought not many words rhyme with umbrella but you found one, who can ever not remember that first kiss. Good luck. Tom. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/4/2018 6:28:00 AM - Many beautiful poems and all different ... but the same starting point :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 11/2/2018 4:04:00 PM Great romantic piece Anne-Lise, well penned indeed. Blessings, Gordon Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/2/2018 4:07:00 PM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Gordon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 11/2/2018 4:00:00 PM A poem from the heart..nicely done, Anne-Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/2/2018 4:02:00 PM - Many thanks for your valuable comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands Date: 11/2/2018 3:37:00 PM Very sweet Ann-Lise. I enjoyed this :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/2/2018 3:40:00 PM - Glad you like it, Heidi :) - Many thanks for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green Date: 11/2/2018 3:03:00 PM Beautifully done my friend. I truly do not think there is anything more magical than that first kiss. Best of luck in the contest Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/2/2018 3:38:00 PM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Chris :) - Rhyming in English is a big challenge for me ... but, do my best :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)