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- Old Memories My First Poem -

                                              Under earthly sun
                                         Surely the madness of pain
                                                Abilities bloom
                                       grew as the stalk of bean plant
                                          I planted seeds of learning

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/15/2024 12:38:00 PM Back with congrats Login to Reply

Christuraj Alex Date: 12/14/2024 11:12:00 PM "grew as the stalk of bean plant" - grand work. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Duke Beaufort Date: 12/3/2024 5:21:00 AM Anne-Lise, you always give me something to think about. Abilities and learning do make life much tolerable. I sometimes think we can even enjoy it. Smiles! Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 12/1/2024 11:01:00 PM AND SO IT BEGAN - wonderful beginnings, bring about nourishment of the mind and soul - excellent start to a talented poetic future. Hugs and blessings Anne-Lise. Jennifer. Login to Reply

Jay Narain Date: 12/1/2024 8:08:00 PM Nive first poem. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/1/2024 7:49:00 PM Very nicely done. One of the best I have yet seen in this contest Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 12/1/2024 11:38:00 AM and look how beautifully you grew Anne :) Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 11/30/2024 1:27:00 PM 2011 wow, you're part of the furniture lol. I've only just got here. Tom Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/30/2024 1:32:00 PM ... an old rocking chair :))) - hugs

John Read Date: 11/30/2024 11:28:00 AM Dear Anne when did you write your first poem, I used to write little rhymes when I was at school, must say i haven't improved much lol. xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/30/2024 11:34:00 AM - My first poem here on P-Soup was 11/26/2011 - My very first poem was many years before that time... but, is long gone ... I was in my teens and in love :) - hugs