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30.11.2024

Anne-Lise  Andresen 
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Poetry Contest
How my first poem was born 
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1st place in the contest

 

Under earthly sun Surely the madness of pain Abilities bloom grew as the stalk of bean plant I planted seeds of learning

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Date: 12/15/2024 12:38:00 PM
Back with congrats
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Date: 12/14/2024 11:12:00 PM
"grew as the stalk of bean plant" - grand work. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/3/2024 5:21:00 AM
Anne-Lise, you always give me something to think about. Abilities and learning do make life much tolerable. I sometimes think we can even enjoy it. Smiles!
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Date: 12/1/2024 11:01:00 PM
AND SO IT BEGAN - wonderful beginnings, bring about nourishment of the mind and soul - excellent start to a talented poetic future. Hugs and blessings Anne-Lise. Jennifer.
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Date: 12/1/2024 8:08:00 PM
Nive first poem.
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Date: 12/1/2024 7:49:00 PM
Very nicely done. One of the best I have yet seen in this contest
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Date: 12/1/2024 11:38:00 AM
and look how beautifully you grew Anne :)
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Date: 11/30/2024 1:27:00 PM
2011 wow, you're part of the furniture lol. I've only just got here. Tom
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/30/2024 1:32:00 PM
... an old rocking chair :))) - hugs
Date: 11/30/2024 11:28:00 AM
Dear Anne when did you write your first poem, I used to write little rhymes when I was at school, must say i haven't improved much lol. xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/30/2024 11:34:00 AM
- My first poem here on P-Soup was 11/26/2011 - My very first poem was many years before that time... but, is long gone ... I was in my teens and in love :) - hugs

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