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Free choice. I chose this lovely couple . you can just see the love in his eyes and how much she adores him in hers. This picture was taken/ pinned by Elaina Paullick

Armed with stolen kiss A breathless moment Echo with star sprinkle Without gunpowder by a higher power The simple beauty Juicy fruity A signature of love As conquered the world ~ Thugs all together ~ 10.09.2017 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 9/16/2017 1:44:00 PM
Forcefully something may be got but more happiness is there where tender love rests. Beautifully drawn a picture of thugs. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 9/16/2017 2:08:00 PM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/14/2017 7:00:00 AM
He is making sure that his is a 'kiss to remember', love the poem and the pic, Anne-Lise ...Maria xxx
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Date: 9/14/2017 1:17:00 PM
- :))) Maria, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/12/2017 11:22:00 AM
Simple beauty, Anne-Lise, I Loved it...
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Date: 9/14/2017 1:16:00 PM
- Many thanks Charlie, for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/12/2017 6:44:00 AM
Nice one smile,well written with vivid imagery and well formed. Kudos
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Date: 9/14/2017 1:15:00 PM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Ifeanyi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/11/2017 11:18:00 PM
Juicilicious piece my dear friend Annelise. So glad to pass by here to enjoy the bliss from your precious pen. Thank a lot again. I'll be back soon to read more. Just enjoying my lil free time at school :). Have a wonderful day and best wishes. Many hugs.
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Date: 9/14/2017 1:14:00 PM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Leonora :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/11/2017 4:34:00 PM
it sings in its contents beautifully painted as always anne lise wishing you a blessed week pal
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Date: 9/12/2017 7:35:00 AM
- Nice to see you Liam, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/11/2017 3:45:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise , lovely write , your picture is lovely too but I think your man is squeezing her face a little to much ,,lol ::)))))))) hugs my friend
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Date: 9/12/2017 7:34:00 AM
- Many thanks Niall, for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/11/2017 2:20:00 PM
Wonderful words Sunshine,,,I'm back
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Date: 9/11/2017 3:02:00 PM
- Richard nice to see you, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/11/2017 6:17:00 AM
I can see why people like your poetry. You are good. I like this poem. Maybe I can someday write like you. Lovely. Emma :)
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Date: 9/11/2017 1:48:00 PM
- Many thanks Emma, for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/11/2017 4:57:00 AM
What a marvelous write my friend! This is a remarkable poem, one full of amazing intrigue! I really loved reading your tremendous poem here this morning, such a grandiose piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/11/2017 1:48:00 PM
- Russel, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/10/2017 8:24:00 PM
Loved this, although once, a kiss murdered my heart!!! LOL
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Date: 9/11/2017 1:46:00 PM
- Arthur, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/10/2017 7:00:00 PM
Beautifully written Sunshine and a joy to read this evening :)
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Date: 9/11/2017 1:46:00 PM
- Many thanks Susan, for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/10/2017 5:26:00 PM
Delightful work! Too much squeeze might hurt.
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Date: 9/11/2017 1:45:00 PM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Jajosh :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/10/2017 5:18:00 PM
Imagery is wonderful, Sunshine , the picture all I can say he can keep his hands to himself and not squeeze so hard. Enjoyed reading . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/11/2017 8:56:00 AM
Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/10/2017 4:14:00 PM
A lovely theme..simple beauty..signature of love.. uniquely penned..well done !
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Date: 9/11/2017 8:56:00 AM
- Vijay, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/10/2017 4:13:00 PM
A wonderful poem A-L...she doesn't seem to be enjoying the face squeezing
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Date: 9/11/2017 8:55:00 AM
Many thanks Tim, for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/10/2017 3:42:00 PM
I ouch to the image ...'d give him a kick not a kiss lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/11/2017 8:55:00 AM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)