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Didn't know that love could make life so incredibly difficult and painful Nothing moving in the positive direction There is no winning, only loss and new wounds Make fuss and braid lies with spider thread Maybe words need to be broken so they no longer have any power Words do not disappear by themselves They can become blurry due to age or being forgotten It's all about finding the right balance When the tears dry out and thought carousel loses spinning The loss of love that was never satisfied is a fact No one wants to build the same puzzle over and over again Destructive pondering, crying and hunting for peace Worn shoes through many trails in several years Meat and blood are a guide in life choices In the wake of loss, gives us permanent scars There's nothing left to say 15/11/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/18/2019 10:59:00 AM

This is a wonderful poem Sunshine Smile, hurting and heartache are difficult to deal with but unfortunately this happens at least once to almost everyone, a sad fact of life. Brilliant work. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/17/2019 3:16:00 AM

An admirable writing dearest, Anne-Lise! Blessings and Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/17/2019 10:57:00 AM

- Many thanks for your kind visits and comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 11/16/2019 10:38:00 PM

There is noting to say when it all comes around.. I ponder that a lot.. Very good write, Anne-Lise..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/17/2019 10:57:00 AM

- Many thanks for your kind visits and comments, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 11/16/2019 12:16:00 PM

You are right and that last stanza sums it up perfectly ..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2019 1:34:00 PM

- Many thanks for your kind visits and comments, S.O.:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/15/2019 11:22:00 PM

Love your poem, sweet lady. God bless you and love to you, Gina

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2019 1:34:00 PM

- Many thanks for your kind visits and comments, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/15/2019 9:18:00 PM

heartbreak is painful...one can feel the emotions in this poem Anne-Lise...powerful penning, well executed! hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2019 1:33:00 PM

- Many thanks for your kind visits and comments, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/15/2019 6:21:00 PM

Painful but truthful. And wonderfully penned Panagiota

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2019 1:33:00 PM

- Many thanks for your kind visits and comments, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/15/2019 3:52:00 PM

So much pain in these verses of heartbreak--elegantly expressed..much depth to your thoughts, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2019 1:32:00 PM

- Many thanks for your kind visits and comments, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ts Poetry

Date: 11/15/2019 1:53:00 PM

We take from past experience and grow love beyond..nice words A-L

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2019 1:31:00 PM

- Many thanks for your kind visits and comments, T S :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/15/2019 1:41:00 PM

"No one wants to build the same puzzle over and over again" Wow, such a compelling and sad piece of writing Anne-Lise. It even sounds a bit angry. The line I pasted I really enjoyed because it is so true. Nicely done my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2019 1:31:00 PM

- Many thanks for your kind visits and comments, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)