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Capture the moments that will never come back two squirrels play in the walnut tree Do they use a sledgehammer to crack a nut? 26.10.22 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 11/15/2022 5:45:00 PM
Teeming in so many such moment it's the rare gift which transmit it's imagery, you achieve it well It's breathtaking,
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2022 2:21:00 AM
- Thank you for your comment, Gregory :) - hugs
Date: 10/27/2022 10:39:00 AM
That's a hard nut to crack. Smart animals find a way. I once witnessed an otter floating on its back cracking open an oyster on its chest with a rock. Nice write and love your new avatar. Hugs ~ John
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2022 11:01:00 AM
- ...with a rock ... sounds painful ... - thank you very much, John ... a pleasant surprise to see you on my poems :) - hugs
Date: 10/27/2022 1:53:00 AM
One is always curious to learn the ways of nature. I guess squirrels have tough teeth. Loved your poem. Hugs.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2022 10:57:00 AM
- They should have eaten something softer ... such as jelly raspberries :))) - hugs
Date: 10/26/2022 3:28:00 PM
Nature and its Creator have foreseen the difficulty and have provided the right tool to do the Job. A profound, witty, and poetic writing, dearest, Anne-Lise. It made me smile! Be blessed!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2022 10:54:00 AM
- Nuts are not easy to crack ... many thanks for your words ... glad it gave you a smile :) - hugs
Date: 10/26/2022 12:39:00 PM
Thought provoking verse Anne, Love the picture. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2022 1:21:00 PM
- Everything is fine with me, Tom ... many thanks ... hope the same for you :) - hugs
Date: 10/26/2022 12:09:00 PM
cute verse... she is a mama. beautiful avatar :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2022 12:12:00 PM
- A cute mama :) - thanks & hugs
Date: 10/26/2022 12:03:00 PM
What a splendid moment you captured, Anne-Lise. Loved your photo and your poem.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2022 12:11:00 PM
- Make me happy ... many thanks my faithful friend, Vijay :) - hugs
Date: 10/26/2022 11:45:00 AM
You wrote a profound and meaningful poem, Anne-Lise. It's loaded with phallic symbols, mainly in the word sledgehammer:). Great metaphors
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2022 12:01:00 PM
- Strange how powerful certain words can be ... - Thank you for your comment, Las :) - hugs

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