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- I Am Dealing With It -

My thoughts are like thunderclouds

         Thoughts that collide and give worthless words

         Only sound .... my mind wants peace

         Running from the storm - another shortcut

         Another way to handle it








16.02.2014
A-L Andresen :)

(3st place in the contest)

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2014

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Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 8/2/2014 6:46:00 PM FORGOT TO RATE> 7!!!!!!!!!!!!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/3/2014 6:05:00 AM - 10000 THANKS!!! :)

Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 8/2/2014 6:45:00 PM EXCELLENT! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/3/2014 6:04:00 AM - THANKS! - :))

Arthur Vaso Date: 4/8/2014 10:02:00 PM Lovely! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/9/2014 2:58:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comment, Arthur - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler Date: 3/11/2014 7:19:00 PM To much brainstorming can sometimes lead to a big headache! I hope you have found that peaceful place you seek. You deserve to be happy, Anne-Lise! Another great write from you! Congratulations on your win, as well! :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/12/2014 2:45:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit, comment and congratulations on my poem, Kelly - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 3/10/2014 6:13:00 AM Very Wonderful write. Congrats on the win, ann Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/10/2014 6:45:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit, comment and congratulations on my poem, Dr. Ram - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A Date: 3/10/2014 2:51:00 AM Anne, awesome win. ~ Love ~ SKAT Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/10/2014 4:21:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit, comment and congratulations on my poem, Skat - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vincent Flannery Date: 2/23/2014 11:37:00 AM A great piece Anne Lise as we continue to battle the mind to succumb to a point of peace. May peace be at your foundation's core. Take care. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/23/2014 2:56:00 PM - Difficult challenges - there is always a way to deal with things .... Never give up - sunshine will come... - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Vincent. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sandip Goswami Date: 2/23/2014 10:16:00 AM Maximum effects with minimum material . Best wishes from India . Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/23/2014 2:55:00 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comment from India, Sandip. - oxox // Anne-Lise :

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/22/2014 4:14:00 PM a really good one, Anne Lise! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/23/2014 6:57:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comment, Andrea - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Linda Jackson Date: 2/22/2014 1:54:00 PM Well written poem with good imagery. "Running from the storm" is an excellent image. Best wishes Linda x Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/22/2014 2:46:00 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comment, Linda - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Stephen Kilmer Date: 2/21/2014 9:57:00 PM Your caught in a trap...there's a way out. Find peace and your mind will be free. ~Kilmer Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/22/2014 7:52:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Stephen. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Tacito Date: 2/21/2014 7:51:00 AM Thunder is a beautiful thing. Certainly, not worthless. It's short, yet impacting to all. May you go up from here. :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/21/2014 12:17:00 PM - After the storm comes the sun ..... always :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Drake. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 2/19/2014 2:25:00 PM storm has passed, anne.. i feel you are enjoying your day!.. huggs to you.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/19/2014 3:17:00 PM - The storm is gone ............ spring is in the waiting .... needs some work.......lol... - huggs back ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock Date: 2/19/2014 12:43:00 PM Life is about dealing with problems we either run from the storm or learn to deal with it. So many ups and downs in life almost like a roller coaster. Hope all is well my friend. Take care. love phyl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/19/2014 2:01:00 PM - True,Phyllis!! - Thanks for the nice visit and comments. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun Date: 2/19/2014 10:17:00 AM A brilliant write my very dear friend Anne Lise. I especially like the two last lines. Handling it is a real courage to one of the transitory things in life: storm. Thank u so much for sharing! More blessings to u. love much and biggest hugs, Leonora Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/19/2014 10:40:00 AM - After the storm comes the sun ..... always :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Leonora. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Darren Watson Date: 2/19/2014 7:18:00 AM A cup of hot chocolate whilst having a soak in the bath calms my dark clouds . Delightful read as always . Thanks for sharing. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/19/2014 7:52:00 AM - Will remember that ..... in the future :)))) Darren Watson Date: 2/19/2014 7:49:00 AM I'm a font of good advice and a part time gynaecologist So if you want to talk , Uncle Darren is always here . Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/19/2014 7:34:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit,good advice and comments, Darren. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Darren Watson Date: 2/19/2014 7:21:00 AM My sisters swear by evening primrose oil . I've tried it , urgh.

Carly Lalion Date: 2/18/2014 12:07:00 PM Finding some time to look at poems; this one caught my attention, Anne. Powerful thoughts lead you to confront a storm. That's the way to go! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/18/2014 12:52:00 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Carly. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll Date: 2/18/2014 12:02:00 PM Nice slice of life write Anne.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/18/2014 12:05:00 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Ken. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 2/18/2014 10:32:00 AM the sun is up and so is your beaming heart, anne... stay well and lovely... keep those bats away, lol.. happy monday with huggs!.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/18/2014 11:22:00 AM - SUNSHINE :))) - After the storm comes the sun ..... always :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Nette. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath Date: 2/18/2014 9:42:00 AM Wow! My lovely friend, you have beautifully differentiated between sound and peace and from where sound evolves. We always want short cut to have the peace with the help of words. Genius you are always. Loved always, bl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/18/2014 11:23:00 AM Only ..... words that came to me ... :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, bl. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 2/18/2014 2:37:00 AM beautifully written I hope the thunderclouds roll away to bring sunshine one day. ps the little eye did the trick thank you i have passed this tip on now xx Jan Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/18/2014 2:45:00 AM - After the storm comes the sun ..... always :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Jan. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kira Price Date: 2/18/2014 1:13:00 AM I know shortcuts gives us that momentary peace, but not the long term we would like. Nicely illustrated! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/18/2014 2:43:00 AM - True,Kira - Thanks for the nice visit and comments. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn Date: 2/17/2014 6:23:00 PM Sorry it's hard to comment when your computer over heats constantly but I wanted to say thank you for your wonderful comment of coloseum. I have to have my new computer torn apart tommorrow hopely love your work above i can understand what you are trying to say very well i call it the poets maddness lol you have to write no matter what and have no peace of mind until it is on paper. cheri Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/18/2014 2:40:00 AM - Always something to fix. . . computers do not have a long life :(( - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Cherl. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 2/17/2014 3:33:00 PM A shortcut from the storm in your head, we all take them until we can deal with them....brilliant write my dear : ) Hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/17/2014 3:36:00 PM - Only ..... words that came to me ... :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Cecilia. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Roger Horsch Date: 2/17/2014 2:55:00 PM I don't know the meaning behind this poem. But I like it. It was wonderful to read........Hugs......Roger Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/17/2014 3:06:00 PM - Always challenges to deal with in life,Roger ..... but we always find a solution - Thanks for the nice visit and comments. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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