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autumn-bilde

- Hurry, Winter Is Coming -

.        .
                                              / \     / \
                                           In the winter
                                        it is more difficult
                                               ¤        ¤  
                                   to be animals in the forest
                                     When the thermometer
                                         creeps below zero                              )
                                    and no food to be found                       
                                                                                              )
                                          But all animals                          
                                       have their solutions                        )
                                           about how to                    
                                            get through                             )
                                          the cold season
                                         It is most critical                       )
                                          for small bodies
                                    Through millions of years              )
                                the mice go to sleep from October
                                          They know that ...                )
                                      cold means life or death       )))






17/10/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 8/15/2021 7:45:00 AM
This is just so lovely, Anne-lise . . . : )
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Date: 10/22/2019 8:05:00 AM
Wow...this is lovely, Anne-Lise! You are talented in more ways than one! I love this shape...and adore the picture that accompanies it..so cute. Hugs // paul
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Date: 10/22/2019 1:25:00 PM
- Glad you liked it, thank you very much Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2019 2:11:00 PM
great shape poem, Sunshine.
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Date: 10/20/2019 7:40:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )
Date: 10/18/2019 11:42:00 AM
Anne-Lise, oh my gosh what a delightful shape poem and what a sweet image to enhance it, so happy I clicked on your poem on this chilly day in Canada !
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Date: 10/19/2019 8:48:00 AM
- Thank you very much D.H., for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : ))
Date: 10/18/2019 11:10:00 AM
This is sweet Anne-Lise. I care very much about the animals. Well done :)
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Date: 10/19/2019 8:48:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : ))
Date: 10/18/2019 7:40:00 AM
It seems God prepared them well with instinct. I like how you formatted this piece. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 10/19/2019 8:48:00 AM
- Thank you very much Richard, for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : ))
Date: 10/18/2019 6:15:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, I love the content of this write. The little ones do find their way to survive the winter months. Love the picture. Your shape is wonderful also. This one has to be a fav. Have a most wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 10/19/2019 8:47:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit, fave and your comment, Mike :) - Lovely weekend, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : ))
Date: 10/18/2019 5:41:00 AM
You always find the most adorable photos Sunshine, and we do have alot to learn from mice, lol, Love and smiles, three rounds of it for you xo
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Date: 10/18/2019 6:09:00 AM
- We have a lot to learn from all the animals, Pixie :) - Thank you very much for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : ))
Date: 10/18/2019 4:29:00 AM
Love this Anne-Lise, what a great message and with great creativity! :)
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Date: 10/18/2019 5:08:00 AM
- Thank you very much Tania, for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )
Date: 10/17/2019 8:35:00 PM
This is adorable Anne-Lise...sometimes it gets too cold for animals too...i had a friend that saved a kitten almost frozen to death, she worked with wildlife so had the stuff needed to bring the kitty around and save his life... love this poem :) hugs
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Date: 10/18/2019 5:07:00 AM
- There are many animals that do not survive the winter ... especially birds ... or sick animals - It is great that there are "animal friends", Sandra :) - Thank you very much for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )
Date: 10/17/2019 7:39:00 PM
Such a cute pic. I hope we all stay warm this winter. Hugs
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Date: 10/18/2019 5:04:00 AM
- Thank you very much Casarah, for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )
Date: 10/17/2019 5:50:00 PM
i love the way you've formatted this poem, anne-lise! it looks great and the picture is perfect, too!
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Date: 10/18/2019 5:04:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )
Date: 10/17/2019 5:40:00 PM
Nice ode to the natural world here! And nice photo to go with it! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/18/2019 5:03:00 AM
- Matthew, thank you very much for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )
Date: 10/17/2019 4:18:00 PM
Fine write Anne-Lise, your penning makes one consider winter and it's effect upon so many of the nature world. Hugs and blessings,Gordon
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Date: 10/18/2019 5:00:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Gordon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )
Date: 10/17/2019 3:24:00 PM
Oh my gosh, Anne-Lise, you have literally melted my heart with this!! I mean, the picture and the poem illustrated the way it is and the message... so awesome. A fave <3
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Date: 10/18/2019 4:59:00 AM
- Small forest mice are really cute and can melt many hearts, H.T. :) - Thank you very much for your visit, the fave and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )
Date: 10/17/2019 1:51:00 PM
My comment disappeared?? No worries about theses little creatures they can survive any winter it's us humans to dumb to know how to survive. Bears hibernate birds fly south and cougars hunt deer, it's the spiders I worry about the flies just disappear, AWESOME poem my sweet friend!
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Date: 10/17/2019 2:00:00 PM
- Flies are disgusting, Bobby ... they eat animal feces ... and going on your sandwich ... or in your coffee cup ... to wash their feet ... æsj !!! - Thank you very much for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )
Date: 10/17/2019 1:06:00 PM
This was really cute Anne-Lise. I often wonder about the creatures when winters arrives, especially birds. I see them in the trees and wonder if they are cold.
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Date: 10/17/2019 1:11:00 PM
- I'm always worried about the animals in winter, Chris ... they can't go to the store to buy winter clothes or light the fireplace ... and besides, mice are super cute :) - Thank you very much for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )
Date: 10/17/2019 12:56:00 PM
Very creative Anne, getting colder here by the minute. Hope all's well. Tom
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Date: 10/17/2019 1:13:00 PM
- A little early for winter yet ... but the animals are getting ready - Everything is well, Tom :) - Thank you very much for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )
Date: 10/17/2019 12:28:00 PM
A cute writing and shape poem! Bravo!
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Date: 10/17/2019 12:51:00 PM
- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise:)
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