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this is for you quality control lol

It won't pass eye of glass Licky-lick zingy twist Chef is called he balded Pretty soon orange moon Try your best fail the test Nasty soup doggie poop I am sad slightly MAD Walked away want to stay You did wrong I stay strong Feelings fly will not cry Expect less gives me rest Oh, so sweet ... me complete * ~ * 11.09.2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Mark Koplin

Date: 9/14/2020 2:08:00 PM

I almost peed myself when I looked at that picture. I absolutely love this. Thanks for the smiles and laughs today my friend!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2020 8:11:00 AM

yeah the pic is superb too lol:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2020 2:10:00 AM

- A joy to share with you, Mark :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/13/2020 3:45:00 PM

Gotta charge the customer extra: Hair costs based on fibrous nutrition. (Fly is charged as protein, btw). lol. G.L. in the contest, Anne Lise, Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2020 2:49:00 AM

- Maybe better with flies (? :))) - Many thanks for the lovely comments, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2020 1:36:00 PM

Looks like you are mastering the three foot footles! That cartoon was a gas!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2020 2:46:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/12/2020 10:35:00 PM

delightful threes so creatively done, anne... love 'em all... huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2020 2:42:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 9/12/2020 4:00:00 PM

This is a well-written piece, Anne-Lise!! This interesting piece will keep you on the top of the winning list!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2020 2:45:00 AM

- It gave me a smile :) - Many thanks for your lovely comments, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 9/13/2020 4:46:00 AM

I'm so sorry, Anne-Lise. I edited it.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/11/2020 2:13:00 PM

you have written this form so well it is like the fun footle form which i love, the pic is hilarious and poem made me think of issues in soup lol !:-( hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/12/2020 5:40:00 AM

- That was exactly what I meant, Jan :) - Many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/11/2020 11:27:00 AM

I'm so glad love was found again, Sunshine. Many couples have disagreements. An "outstretched hand" always helps us forgive and realize our own faults. You did really well with this form! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/11/2020 11:33:00 AM

- You can learn a lot from your own mistakes :) - Many thanks for the lovely comments, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/11/2020 10:00:00 AM

These remind me of footles, well written Anne and good luck in the contest. Tom P. S. Love the pic lol

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/11/2020 11:23:00 AM

- Yes, like Footle :) - Fun to write ... thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)