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- Hair In the Soup -

It won't pass
                                            eye of glass

                                             Licky-lick
                                            zingy twist

                                           Chef is called
                                             he balded

                                            Pretty soon
                                           orange moon

                                           Try your best
                                            fail the test

                                            Nasty soup
                                           doggie poop
                                    
                                            I am sad
                                          slightly MAD

                                          Walked away
                                          want to stay

                                         You did wrong
                                          I stay strong

                                           Feelings fly
                                           will not cry

                                           Expect less
                                          gives me rest

                                          Oh, so sweet
                                         ... me complete



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                                          11.09.2020
                                  Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Mark Koplin Date: 9/14/2020 2:08:00 PM I almost peed myself when I looked at that picture. I absolutely love this. Thanks for the smiles and laughs today my friend! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/15/2020 8:11:00 AM yeah the pic is superb too lol:-) hugs jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/15/2020 2:10:00 AM - A joy to share with you, Mark :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 9/13/2020 3:45:00 PM Gotta charge the customer extra: Hair costs based on fibrous nutrition. (Fly is charged as protein, btw). lol. G.L. in the contest, Anne Lise, Gershon Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/14/2020 2:49:00 AM - Maybe better with flies (? :))) - Many thanks for the lovely comments, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/13/2020 1:36:00 PM Looks like you are mastering the three foot footles! That cartoon was a gas!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/14/2020 2:46:00 AM - Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 9/12/2020 10:35:00 PM delightful threes so creatively done, anne... love 'em all... huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/13/2020 2:42:00 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera Date: 9/12/2020 4:00:00 PM This is a well-written piece, Anne-Lise!! This interesting piece will keep you on the top of the winning list! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/14/2020 2:45:00 AM - It gave me a smile :) - Many thanks for your lovely comments, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Newton Ranaweera Date: 9/13/2020 4:46:00 AM I'm so sorry, Anne-Lise. I edited it.

Jan Allison Date: 9/11/2020 2:13:00 PM you have written this form so well it is like the fun footle form which i love, the pic is hilarious and poem made me think of issues in soup lol !:-( hugs jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/12/2020 5:40:00 AM - That was exactly what I meant, Jan :) - Many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/11/2020 11:27:00 AM I'm so glad love was found again, Sunshine. Many couples have disagreements. An "outstretched hand" always helps us forgive and realize our own faults. You did really well with this form! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/11/2020 11:33:00 AM - You can learn a lot from your own mistakes :) - Many thanks for the lovely comments, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 9/11/2020 10:00:00 AM These remind me of footles, well written Anne and good luck in the contest. Tom P. S. Love the pic lol Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/11/2020 11:23:00 AM - Yes, like Footle :) - Fun to write ... thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)