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Man putting engagement ring on woman's finger

The golden jewels Diamonds are forever Make a ray of sunshine The diamond petals You have touched my heart and soul So please Lord bless our love - SPLIT HAIKUS - (syllables 5-7-1-5 http://www.howmanysyllables.com) Mars 25 - 2016 A-L Andresen :)

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/17/2016 12:53:00 PM

A nice dual of split haiku. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/17/2016 1:31:00 PM

- Thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comment, dear Phyllis :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/8/2016 10:06:00 AM

absolutely beautiful so romantic Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/8/2016 11:29:00 AM

- Thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comment, Jan :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/2/2016 12:50:00 PM

Hi Anne, Lovely haiku.Best of luck for the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/2/2016 1:15:00 PM

- Manmath, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anisha Dutta

Date: 4/2/2016 12:24:00 PM

Good Write. Wishing Best for Contest. Anisha D

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/2/2016 12:36:00 PM

- Anisha, thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comment :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 4/2/2016 6:30:00 AM

Heavenly haiku.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/2/2016 8:05:00 AM

- Thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comment, Iris :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

M Asim Nehal

Date: 4/1/2016 1:26:00 PM

Very costly symbol of love....nevertheless full marks...7

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/1/2016 1:30:00 PM

- Yes, very expensive ..... - Thanks for the pleasant visit a 7 and lovely comment, M. Asim :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 3/31/2016 9:09:00 AM

Rings and diamonds ... a symbol of everlasting love; if the love does not last, then check out the diamonds...they might be fake:) hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/31/2016 11:41:00 AM

- Plastic fantastic, very cruel and fake love Paul - Thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comment :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/30/2016 12:10:00 PM

Splendid! Love Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/31/2016 11:42:00 AM

- Rajat, thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comment :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/28/2016 11:48:00 PM

Great haikus:) all the best in the contest:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/29/2016 4:05:00 AM

- Many thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comments, Jo :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Nithya Venkat

Date: 3/28/2016 9:12:00 PM

Beautiful haiku!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/29/2016 4:05:00 AM

- Many thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comments, Nithya :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/28/2016 12:43:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work..This must be for a contest for I have seen several written like this one..First Haiku last line I think it needs to be reconsidered..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/28/2016 4:08:00 PM

Yes, it is okay but the other line wasn't bad it was just wrong tense or something..I can't remember what..Maybe it was a plural subject with a singular predicate..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2016 2:02:00 PM

- I need a new line, a better line :) - Many thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comments, Sara :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan

Date: 3/27/2016 7:47:00 PM

Beautiful Haikus Anne Lise, yes the ring is the symbol of love, I am lucky I have two as we renewed our wedding vow's 8 years ago, good luck in the contest and take care....Vera

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2016 4:28:00 AM

- Yes, you are one lucky lady, dear Vera ..... a handsome and lovely husband - Many thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comment :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2016 6:08:00 PM

Lovely thoughts around the special ring.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2016 4:29:00 AM

- Many thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comments, Andrea :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 3/26/2016 8:26:00 PM

Romantic haiku Anne-Lise. My best wishes for the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2016 6:15:00 AM

- Many thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comments, Nayda :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/26/2016 2:14:00 PM

Beautiful poem to melt one's heart remembering the past, a beautiful symbol of expressing love. Words themselves are tiny stars glittering in the sky of loving heart. 7 sure, loved always my lovely lovely friend, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2016 2:23:00 PM

- Your comments sound like a poem of beautiful words, dear Bl :) - Thanks for the lovely words and a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 3/25/2016 6:01:00 PM

well done my friend..good luck in the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2016 1:26:00 PM

- Frederic thanks for visiting and best wishes for the contest, I think will need it :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/25/2016 5:52:00 PM

I really enjoyed these, and the photo goes so well in black and white! :) Happy Easter!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2016 1:24:00 PM

- I've never heard about "split haikus" .... but fun to try :) - Thanks for visiting and comments - Nice that you enjoyed both photo and message, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)