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- Haiku X 62 - Deep Wounded -

deep wounds that leave scars one moment much more must flow - shadows from the soul her tears in silence the strong arms that held her up - in the thoughts and deeds please do not grieve more and afterwards remember - pearls of morning’s dew 05.08.2015 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/4/2022 2:51:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/4/2022 4:40:00 PM

- Many thanks for your valuable comment...really appreciate your words, Sara :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/27/2019 2:48:00 AM

Beautifully written my friend!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2019 2:50:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Valerie Staton

Date: 1/25/2019 8:32:00 AM

Very nicely written!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/25/2019 3:17:00 PM

- Thanks for friendly visits and comment, Valerie :) - hugs // Sun :)

Frances Schiavina

Date: 12/26/2018 9:07:00 AM

Well done! It really touches the heart.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/26/2018 11:54:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Frances - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 2/26/2017 9:48:00 PM

Your haiku's are awesome as usual :) xo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/27/2017 2:30:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Debbie :) - hugs // Sun :)

Carole Duet

Date: 10/6/2016 8:27:00 PM

A touching little poem, Sunny....

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/7/2016 2:43:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Carole :) - hugs // Sun :)

Daniel Davies

Date: 4/23/2016 10:07:00 PM

A pirated pearl of poetry! The greatest form of flattery? Perhaps the pirates act Speaks more profoundly than Any compliments I propose!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2016 6:53:00 AM

- ..... "My famous Haiku X 62" !!!!!! ...... :)))) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Daniel :) - hugs // Sun :)

Olli Doyle

Date: 4/20/2016 5:27:00 PM

She has gone and stolen another of your haikus. Haiku 63. What an idiot. http://mochizuki-chiyome.deviantart.com/art/Haiku-X-2-604036190?q=gallery%3AMochizuki-Chiyome&qo=2

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/21/2016 8:21:00 AM

- Thank you, Olli :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 4/20/2016 3:26:00 PM

Dear Anne-Lise, By the way, this is a quite passionate and very moving Haiku. The imagery is worth a thousand words. Outstanding Work!! A "TR/FAV" too!! (I always expect no less from you Dear One!!) Cheers and Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2016 3:52:00 PM

- Thank you, my good friend Gary - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 4/20/2016 3:21:00 PM

Dear Anne-Lise, I already have sent Poetry Soup Administration a detailed official complaint by me, on behalf of and in defense of and in support of you. The alleged perpetrator should be aware that stealing another poet's poetry is the gravest violation of expected professional decorum and ethics expected of all of us who write, post poetry and prose, and professionally publish books. Copyright Infringement is a BIG DEAL for sure!! Let me know if you need anything else!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2016 3:50:00 PM

- Thank you for your lovey support, my friend Gary - All I need is justice and good friends :) - hugs and love // Anne-Lise :)

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/19/2016 2:30:00 PM

Sorry about your poem being stolen Anne--Lis. It seems Tsui has another account. Jan informed me of this after I'd commented on your poem. I hope it all gets sorted out, in simple terms the thief should be banned. You have a beautiful way with words Anne.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2016 3:06:00 PM

- Lenny, thanks for your support - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jess C.

Date: 4/19/2016 1:37:00 PM

To get it taken down, you'll need to log in to DA, click the report icon at the bottom right of the page, and click on file a DMCA report under permissions issues.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2016 3:05:00 PM

Jess C.

Date: 4/19/2016 1:35:00 PM

Just as the person commented below, Tsui has stolen your poem here and posted it on her DA, claiming that she owns copyright over it. http://mochizuki-chiyome.deviantart.com/art/Haiku-X-1-603903905 Screenshots: http://imgur.com/OutOfXA http://i.imgur.com/cok84Pm.png http://i.imgur.com/hl9k1ZJ.png

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2016 3:05:00 PM

- Jess,thanks for your support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olli Doyle

Date: 4/19/2016 1:30:00 PM

She is at it again. Tsui has a new name is back to stealing. http://mochizuki-chiyome.deviantart.com/art/Haiku-X-1-603903905 Sorry you have to deal with this idiot.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2016 1:34:00 PM

- Yes, I've seen it Olli - Thanks again for compassion and supportive words, greatly appreciate that - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/10/2016 5:55:00 PM

As I see some one is advertising your poems for you! I thought I would come and read the original, and tell you, I am happy to read this gem!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2016 11:00:00 AM

- I am happy that this is MY POEMS !!! - hugs and thanks // Arthur :)

Andrew Crisci

Date: 4/10/2016 10:39:00 AM

Hi, Anne Lise. I have sent a message to this impostor. I hope that Poetry Soup will delete her account. She is more despicable than her wicked act. Please notify me of any notifications from Poetry Soup. I stand by you in fighting this injustice. Take care. Hugs, Andrew.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2016 12:45:00 PM

- I will :) - thanks for your support, Andrew - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2016 7:53:00 AM

Annalise...that's weird that she stole your haiku

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2016 7:56:00 AM

- Yes, quite rude !!! - I have report it - and posted it in a blog ..... maybe someone will find several poems that are stolen by her? - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olli Doyle

Date: 4/9/2016 10:02:00 PM

Wanted to let you know that someone is trying to pass your work off as her own. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/__haiku_x_62___deep_wounded_776352 Tsui Xingjuan

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2016 10:58:00 AM

- Thanks, Olli :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olli Doyle
Date: 4/10/2016 9:34:00 PM

She is know on several games I play and up until she was banned on DeviantArt know as a thief who then tries to pass or sell others work as her own and being underage and acting completely inappropriate with adult rated themes and comments. She has your poem posted on game claiming it as hers.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2016 7:27:00 AM

- Very grateful for this message, thanks Olli :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/15/2015 9:08:00 PM

There are better days ahead, we just have to get through the bad ones to find them... I like how you leave the reader with an inspiring final message. Very nicely written, Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/18/2015 12:44:00 PM

- So true, dear Kelly - Many thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 8/8/2015 4:01:00 PM

beautiful haiku anne lise deep touching pal my prayers are always with you dear friend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/8/2015 4:06:00 PM

- I'm lucky to have a friend like you, dear Liam - I thank you with all my heart <3 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kevin Leake

Date: 8/8/2015 1:28:00 PM

Lovely wriiten piece Anne, Enjoyed the last line, brings on a sad finish. But bright future. Best Wishes Kevin

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/8/2015 3:01:00 PM

- The finest floral wreath is made of smile, Kevin :) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 8/7/2015 4:51:00 PM

This sad but written so effortlessly...I love it a fav

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/8/2015 11:36:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments - Greatly appreciate your "fav.", Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 8/7/2015 4:17:00 PM

The sour and sweet ingredients of life. You start with deep wounds, but eventually pearls of morning’s dew arrive. Very well expressed haiku, Anne Lise. ~ Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/8/2015 11:34:00 AM

- Always the optimist ..... look positively at life :) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Paul - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/7/2015 7:43:00 AM

A very interesting progression of three. Such is life! And may I wish you a wonderful day! Thank-you again for these images and connections. And yes, life is both happy and sad at the same time. There are no answers to our underlying questions. So we do the best we can.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/7/2015 7:49:00 AM

- Always try to look for the "light at the end of the tunnel" .... although it can be difficult sometimes - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Duke :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/6/2015 5:37:00 PM

Ahh!! Very expressive and emotive work..Thanks for the visit by my page..I appreciate the kind review..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/7/2015 3:28:00 AM

- Emotions that belong to life, Sara ...... we learn to live with it :) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)