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- Haiku X 49 - THE SCREAM -

- Haiku X 49 - THE SCREAM -


All out of nothing 
No echo of man lingers
Screaming in silent 





18.03.2015 A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 3/25/2015 1:37:00 PM
Well said on this haiku Anne Lise. love phyl
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Date: 3/25/2015 1:59:00 PM
- Thanks for visit and lovely comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/24/2015 9:24:00 AM
And we scream and scream and scream and are not heard. An excellent poem.
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Date: 3/24/2015 12:48:00 PM
.... we do .... - M.L., thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/23/2015 2:46:00 AM
Super strong words!
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Date: 3/23/2015 4:05:00 AM
- Njeri, thanks for visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/21/2015 8:10:00 AM
WOW! Very profound.
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Date: 3/21/2015 12:17:00 PM
- Thank you, my friend Monterey :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2015 4:11:00 PM
A powerful haiku, only in the silence can we hear eternity. Nicely done 7
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Date: 3/21/2015 12:16:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit, a 7 and lovely comments David - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2015 3:21:00 PM
Very deep write and well expressed Anne...hug
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Date: 3/20/2015 3:44:00 PM
- Thank you, my friend Joseph :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2015 7:48:00 AM
Dear Anne-Lise, I wonder what prodded this to flow from your pen. I hope it's just a product of your keen observation about the thousand facets of man. Whatever it is, it has resulted in an outstanding piece. A 7. Hope you have a great day. God bless you. Hugs! :) Kim
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Date: 3/20/2015 1:58:00 PM
- Yes, simply observation about the thousand facets of man Kim :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2015 3:34:00 AM
letting it all is the point and you said it clearly to me at least. you are true to your 'penmanship'' matt i'm out peace!!
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Date: 3/20/2015 3:46:00 AM
- Thank you, Phatt Matt :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2015 11:12:00 PM
Sometimes, the loudest screams are never heard... So much emotion is expressed here in just three short lines. Really great poem, Anne-Lise!
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Date: 3/20/2015 2:55:00 AM
- Thank you, my friend Kelly :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2015 6:01:00 PM
really love how this drew anne lise excellent pen dear pal wishing you a blessed beautiful evening
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Date: 3/20/2015 2:55:00 AM
- Thank you, my friend Liam :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2015 3:08:00 PM
vivid imagery from your creative mind, anne... wow!..hope you are well.. huggs
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Date: 3/20/2015 2:54:00 AM
- Thank you, my friend Nette :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2015 7:08:00 AM
I didn't think that the smallness of a haiku could allow such didactic expression, kudos!
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Date: 3/19/2015 8:49:00 AM
- Not always we need so many words, Hannington :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2015 6:44:00 AM
Silent screams can be the most significant, Anne Lise!! They can also serve as a safety valve! All the best. /x/ paul
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Date: 3/19/2015 9:00:00 AM
- Thank you, my friend Paul :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/18/2015 10:28:00 PM
Powerful emotive scream.. Love this haiku!
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Date: 3/19/2015 3:55:00 AM
- Thank you, my friend Dave :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/18/2015 12:54:00 PM
Cool and powerful poem my lovely friend. i feel 7++ here. D.P.Potter rightly commented, you have golden pen. Loved always,bl
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Date: 3/18/2015 1:24:00 PM
- Dear friend Bl, thanks for the nice visit, a 7, lovely comments and S-mail - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/18/2015 11:06:00 AM
Powerful pen Anne Lise!By the title this is a very deep sad and provoking haiku, my dear friend.A 7 from me!I hope all is well with you.Keeping you and your dad in my prayers everyday. Take good care now.Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D.
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Date: 3/18/2015 1:21:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit, a 7, lovely comments and prayers - My father becomes weaker and weaker every day - thank you for asking, my friend Dorian - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/18/2015 9:33:00 AM
A fabulous haihu A-L... Hugs Tim
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Date: 3/18/2015 9:37:00 AM
- Thank you, my friend Tim :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)