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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/25/2015 1:37:00 PM

Well said on this haiku Anne Lise. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/25/2015 1:59:00 PM

- Thanks for visit and lovely comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/24/2015 9:24:00 AM

And we scream and scream and scream and are not heard. An excellent poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/24/2015 12:48:00 PM

.... we do .... - M.L., thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 3/23/2015 2:46:00 AM

Super strong words!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/23/2015 4:05:00 AM

- Njeri, thanks for visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 3/21/2015 8:10:00 AM

WOW! Very profound.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2015 12:17:00 PM

- Thank you, my friend Monterey :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)

David Meade

Date: 3/20/2015 4:11:00 PM

A powerful haiku, only in the silence can we hear eternity. Nicely done 7

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2015 12:16:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit, a 7 and lovely comments David - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 3/20/2015 3:21:00 PM

Very deep write and well expressed Anne...hug

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2015 3:44:00 PM

- Thank you, my friend Joseph :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/20/2015 7:48:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, I wonder what prodded this to flow from your pen. I hope it's just a product of your keen observation about the thousand facets of man. Whatever it is, it has resulted in an outstanding piece. A 7. Hope you have a great day. God bless you. Hugs! :) Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2015 1:58:00 PM

- Yes, simply observation about the thousand facets of man Kim :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phatt Matt

Date: 3/20/2015 3:34:00 AM

letting it all is the point and you said it clearly to me at least. you are true to your 'penmanship'' matt i'm out peace!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2015 3:46:00 AM

- Thank you, Phatt Matt :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 3/19/2015 11:12:00 PM

Sometimes, the loudest screams are never heard... So much emotion is expressed here in just three short lines. Really great poem, Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2015 2:55:00 AM

- Thank you, my friend Kelly :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 3/19/2015 6:01:00 PM

really love how this drew anne lise excellent pen dear pal wishing you a blessed beautiful evening

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2015 2:55:00 AM

- Thank you, my friend Liam :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/19/2015 3:08:00 PM

vivid imagery from your creative mind, anne... wow!..hope you are well.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2015 2:54:00 AM

- Thank you, my friend Nette :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)

Hannington Mumo

Date: 3/19/2015 7:08:00 AM

I didn't think that the smallness of a haiku could allow such didactic expression, kudos!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/19/2015 8:49:00 AM

- Not always we need so many words, Hannington :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 3/19/2015 6:44:00 AM

Silent screams can be the most significant, Anne Lise!! They can also serve as a safety valve! All the best. /x/ paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/19/2015 9:00:00 AM

- Thank you, my friend Paul :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/18/2015 12:54:00 PM

Cool and powerful poem my lovely friend. i feel 7++ here. D.P.Potter rightly commented, you have golden pen. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/18/2015 1:24:00 PM

- Dear friend Bl, thanks for the nice visit, a 7, lovely comments and S-mail - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 3/18/2015 11:06:00 AM

Powerful pen Anne Lise!By the title this is a very deep sad and provoking haiku, my dear friend.A 7 from me!I hope all is well with you.Keeping you and your dad in my prayers everyday. Take good care now.Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/18/2015 1:21:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit, a 7, lovely comments and prayers - My father becomes weaker and weaker every day - thank you for asking, my friend Dorian - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 3/18/2015 9:33:00 AM

A fabulous haihu A-L... Hugs Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/18/2015 9:37:00 AM

- Thank you, my friend Tim :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)