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Rights to care and health Ebola - child is orphan A safe hand to hold Long dark eyelashes Protect my little angel God will make a way 03.02.2015 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 2/9/2015 7:36:00 PM
You took the unpleasant down poetry lane, and summoned the Source.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/10/2015 2:16:00 AM
- Iris, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - I wish you a great day! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/9/2015 7:34:00 AM
Stunning! Full of sadness yet infuses with hope in your last line.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/9/2015 11:48:00 AM
- Monterey, thanks for the nice visit and beautiful comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/7/2015 2:23:00 PM
You have a kind and caring heart Anne Lise; may your lovely character rub off on others. Well done with this touching write. #7 Have a lovely weekend. /x/ paul
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/7/2015 2:30:00 PM
- Paul, thanks for the nice visit, a 7 and beautiful comments - Lovely weekend!- // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/7/2015 12:55:00 PM
I went to a presentation on Ebola, it is a devestating disease. Good for you for brining attention to the peoples plight.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/7/2015 1:45:00 PM
- A frightening disease ebola, Richard - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/6/2015 6:21:00 AM
Ebola is a menace> may God bless the child and protect him from all ills. Well done Anne Lie.Hugs! Rajat
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/6/2015 11:46:00 AM
- Rajat, thanks for the nice visit and beautiful comments - Happy weekend! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/6/2015 12:46:00 AM
Your heartfelt words are very reassuring, Anne-Lise. May the innocent little ones always be protected from harm...
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Date: 2/6/2015 11:45:00 AM
- Thanks for the visit on my poem: - Angel - much appreciated your words Kelly - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/5/2015 11:00:00 PM
Beautiful prayer, Anne lise, may they find a cure and stop all these deaths.7 Blessings dear loving and compassionate friend
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/6/2015 11:44:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit, a 7 and beautiful comments, dear Eve - Happy weekend!- // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/5/2015 5:11:00 PM
That was beautiful.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/6/2015 11:43:00 AM
- M.L., thanks for the nice visit and beautiful comments - Happy weekend! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/5/2015 4:59:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise! Very beautiful pen! I really enjoyed reading your very sweet haiku suit, my dearest friend. Golden pen! Wish and pray all the best. Children are such a great gift from the Lord! A 7 from me! Have a wonderful evening! :) Love n hugs! xxx D.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/6/2015 11:41:00 AM
- Children are the most precious we have here on Earth - Thanks for the nice visit and beautiful comments dear Dorian - Happy weekend! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/5/2015 10:29:00 AM
Your poem says a lot without much thought! It rings true and is a joy to read. Emile.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/5/2015 11:18:00 AM
- It rings true and is so sad to read in my ears / eyes, Emile - Thanks for the visit on my poem: - Angel - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/5/2015 8:41:00 AM
Interesting work..I had not thought about how many children might have been left as orphans from that deadly virus..I know that some survived while their parents died..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/5/2015 11:14:00 AM
- Sara, thanks for the visit on my poem: - Angel - much appreciated your words - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/4/2015 5:45:00 PM
A brilliant write Anne Lise. Always the innocent seem to have to pay the price of others neglect and cruelty. Does not seem to matter where in the world, be it man made like Bosnia or Ebola in West Arfica. There is an photo that always haunts me from Vietnam. That of a little girl running down a dirt road her face showing such such agony, she is naked because her clothes were burned from her body in a napalm attack. Where was God. She also was a little angel. Love Shane xxx
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Shane Cooper
Date: 2/5/2015 4:08:00 AM
My heart is on my sleeve. Just how I was made. Love Shane xxx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/5/2015 3:48:00 AM
- You show me your heart, Shane !!!!
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Shane Cooper
Date: 2/5/2015 3:31:00 AM
I apologise if I seemed a little over the top but I become very upset when I think on little children having to suffer. Please forgive if I have caused any distress . Love Shane xxx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/5/2015 3:25:00 AM
- A picture you will never forget, Shane - A good question: "Where was God" ???? - Thanks for your thoughts and visit on my poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/4/2015 12:38:00 PM
Certainly God will make a way.... blessings..... Lovely done my lovely lovely friend. 7+ i feel here. Loved always,bl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/4/2015 1:16:00 PM
- Bl, thanks for nice visit, a 7 and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/4/2015 8:45:00 AM
deep beautiful pen anne lise gods little angels so sad to see such suffering bless you pal excellent piece
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/4/2015 1:14:00 PM
- The child are earth fresh flowers - thanks for the lovely words on my poem,Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/4/2015 6:41:00 AM
God bless you for caring! A seven from me for that, dear Ann Lise.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/4/2015 12:58:00 PM
- Life horrors ..... my heart weeps - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/4/2015 6:10:00 AM
anne lise - you've captured the sadness of ebola orphans very well in this tender poem...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/4/2015 12:56:00 PM
- Frightening disease ebola - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Ilene - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/4/2015 5:10:00 AM
This is an excellent prayer poem full of love for a mother's most precious gem my dear friend, Anne Lise. I'm hugging your poem, the girl in the picture and you. Thank you so much for sharing. Thank you so much as well for your kind visit on my latest post and your wonderful comments. I'll make you believe about my story so soon ;)))). Have a wonderful and blessed weekdays! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/4/2015 12:54:00 PM
- We must never forget the small children - thanks for nice visit and lovely comments dear friend Leonora - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/3/2015 10:33:00 PM
Excellent. Mother's care and prayers are always helpful to their babies . Tks
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/4/2015 2:50:00 AM
- Happy to see you back my friend Ravi - Thanks for the visit on my poem: - Sweet BaBy - much appreciated your words - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/3/2015 9:40:00 PM
Awww so sweet my dear Anne Lise! Loving hugs, Jack xox
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/4/2015 2:48:00 AM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my Haiku dear Jack - Sweet BaBy - much appreciated your words - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/3/2015 2:21:00 PM
A mother's prayer is powerful for her baby!! Sweet is your love.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/4/2015 2:47:00 AM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my Haiku my friend David - Sweet BaBy - much appreciated your words :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/3/2015 2:16:00 PM
simply stunning Anne Lise:-) Hugs Jan xxx a 7 xxx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/3/2015 3:03:00 PM
- A baby are earth fresh flowers - thanks for the lovely words on my poem, dear Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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