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24.04.2025
Anne-Lise Andresen
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river lush and rich driftwood delays its journey - the mountain snow melts

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/29/2025 3:27:00 AM

Beautiful painting in real-time and a very nice description in a haiku. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/28/2025 10:18:00 AM

Great picture and wonderful write my friend. love phyl

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/27/2025 1:26:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Great Picture... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Hugs... Have a wonderful spring day.........

Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/27/2025 7:56:00 AM

Anne-Lise, a beautiful scene indeed. The I can practically hear the sound of the water rushing down the slope. I bet it's cold!!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/26/2025 4:45:00 PM

I love this haiku. It's amazing how you wove driftwood into a position of power in this haiku.

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/26/2025 3:03:00 PM

Hey Anne-Lise! What a vivid and very descriptive poem! I really like the image you shared.

Michael Tor

Date: 4/25/2025 7:34:00 PM

Such a scenic haiku loved your words...

Jay Narain

Date: 4/25/2025 10:32:00 AM

Nice picture and a perfect haiku for it.

Reya Suri

Date: 4/25/2025 10:30:00 AM

What a rich piece with perfect imagery! Love the picture you've provided.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/25/2025 12:54:00 AM

Perfect imagery. I've seen this picture before but my muse is at low ebb. Wonderful haiku, dear Anne.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/24/2025 7:04:00 PM

I enjoyed your beautiful poem, and also the beautiful picture, Anne-Lise. Have a great weekend. :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/24/2025 6:24:00 PM

beautiful and sensitive, remind me something in "Yellowstone", a day off enjoyed yann

David Crandall

Date: 4/24/2025 9:19:00 AM

Ah, put me on the bank of that mountain stream! I remember sending little stick boats down streams like that and imagining their journeys. :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2025 10:07:00 AM

- Happy childhood memories, David ... I did the same :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/24/2025 8:11:00 AM

Lovely Anne-Lise, brought back memories of the melting snow in the fjords. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2025 10:09:00 AM

- Nice that you still dream about the Norwegian fjords... they have left their mark, Tom :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs