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17.11.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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they pelted and bounced hydromassage swimming pool - ground force landing

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Date: 11/25/2024 10:50:00 AM
Anne-Lise, funny that the message pool gets that kind of treatment. Those stones travel down from some pretty high altitudes.
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Date: 11/18/2024 3:55:00 PM
Hello Sunshine smile, hail stones can do a lot of damage. I hope it does not last to long. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Date: 11/18/2024 4:29:00 AM
This is a very excellent one. Hail can do so much damage, but it is an exciting unexpected happening of nature. Thanks for sharing this work with us. Sara K
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Date: 11/17/2024 9:13:00 PM
I love the sound of hail, but I stay indoors. I like this excellent haiku about an earth phenomenon.
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Date: 11/17/2024 11:38:00 AM
Wow that is some storm Anne. Xx
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Date: 11/17/2024 11:24:00 AM
I wouldn't want to be out walking in that lol I've heard they can be quite big and cause dents to cars. Tom
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Date: 11/17/2024 11:33:00 AM
- I was out for a walk with my two dogs in this weather today, Tom - They sting my cheek - hugs

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