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- Haiku X 301 - windy -

                                        sentenceless clouds drift
                                          obliterate the curtains -
                                              wind rises higher

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2024

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Duke Beaufort Date: 2/6/2024 12:00:00 PM Ah...the feeling of an approaching front or something more violent to come. The feeling of the clouds being a bit disorganized is also a keen way to look at the atmosphere. The might apply to emotion as well. Our minds might be clouded while we get more excited. Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 1/31/2024 10:41:00 AM The high winds can certainly blow those curtains creating sounds or doing a lot of damage around the yard. Nice haiku. love phyl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/1/2024 2:22:00 AM - Thank you very much, Phyllis :) - hugs

Hiya Sharma Date: 1/30/2024 6:21:00 PM Oh my, what a beautifully descriptive and intriguing write within few words.. A vivid imagery you've painted here, which also has a meaningful essence, metaphorically.. Clouds drifting away and the voice rises beyond, with moving winds that erase stillness.. Wonderfully crafted! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/1/2024 2:21:00 AM - Thank you very much, Hiya :) - hugs

Sotto Poet Date: 1/30/2024 4:35:00 PM I appreciate the profound imagery present in your Haiku, Anne-Lise. Exceptionally brilliant. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/1/2024 2:21:00 AM - Thank you very much, Las :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/30/2024 1:40:00 PM Beautiful snapshot to go along with your work. Great write. Sara K Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/31/2024 1:42:00 AM - Thank you very much, Sara :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/30/2024 12:36:00 PM I feel the imagery in your short poems. Brilliant. Hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/1/2024 2:21:00 AM - Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs

Deb M Date: 1/30/2024 12:26:00 PM Well said Sweet Sunshine! Lovely….Debx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/1/2024 2:20:00 AM - Thank you very much, Deb :) - hugs

Sam Kauffman Date: 1/30/2024 12:22:00 PM Oh, I do love your haiku, Anne-Lise. You really have the ability to say and illustrate so much in seventeen syllables. I especially love your mute clouds drifting as the wind rises! A storm is on the horizon here and I can feel the wind rising! Thank you for sharing your gift. Blessings and hugs. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/1/2024 2:20:00 AM - Thank you very much, Sam :) - hugs

Ilene Bauer Date: 1/30/2024 12:14:00 PM beautifully written, anne-lise! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/1/2024 2:20:00 AM - Thank you very much, Ilene :) - hugs

Silent One Date: 1/30/2024 11:47:00 AM Dark and deep imagery my friend.. Nice arrangement of words, but you always do that with you haikus... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/30/2024 12:09:00 PM - Thanks, S.O. :) -

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/30/2024 11:30:00 AM What a lovely image! I can feel it! Hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/30/2024 12:09:00 PM - Thanks, Kim :) -

Jay Narain Date: 1/30/2024 9:54:00 AM Nice haiku. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/30/2024 12:09:00 PM - Thanks, Jay :) -