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30.01.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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sentenceless clouds drift obliterate the curtains - wind rises higher

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/6/2024 12:00:00 PM

Ah...the feeling of an approaching front or something more violent to come. The feeling of the clouds being a bit disorganized is also a keen way to look at the atmosphere. The might apply to emotion as well. Our minds might be clouded while we get more excited.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/31/2024 10:41:00 AM

The high winds can certainly blow those curtains creating sounds or doing a lot of damage around the yard. Nice haiku. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2024 2:22:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Phyllis :) - hugs

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/30/2024 6:21:00 PM

Oh my, what a beautifully descriptive and intriguing write within few words.. A vivid imagery you've painted here, which also has a meaningful essence, metaphorically.. Clouds drifting away and the voice rises beyond, with moving winds that erase stillness.. Wonderfully crafted!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2024 2:21:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Hiya :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/30/2024 4:35:00 PM

I appreciate the profound imagery present in your Haiku, Anne-Lise. Exceptionally brilliant.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2024 2:21:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Las :) - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/30/2024 3:21:00 PM

lovely, Anne-Lise--describes what happens here in spring....25-35 mph winds...obliterate a lot of things. Nicely penned. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2024 2:21:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Sara :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/30/2024 1:40:00 PM

Beautiful snapshot to go along with your work. Great write. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/31/2024 1:42:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Sara :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/30/2024 12:36:00 PM

I feel the imagery in your short poems. Brilliant. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2024 2:21:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs

Deb M

Date: 1/30/2024 12:26:00 PM

Well said Sweet Sunshine! Lovely….Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2024 2:20:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Deb :) - hugs

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/30/2024 12:22:00 PM

Oh, I do love your haiku, Anne-Lise. You really have the ability to say and illustrate so much in seventeen syllables. I especially love your mute clouds drifting as the wind rises! A storm is on the horizon here and I can feel the wind rising! Thank you for sharing your gift. Blessings and hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2024 2:20:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Sam :) - hugs