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- Haiku X 285 - Rain In Norway -

                                         clouds become heavy
                                   a complex rhythm of the rain -
                                          my beloved sleeps

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I Am Anaya Date: 8/1/2023 5:17:00 PM And its mist makes us sleepy, great (Gif) and haiku. I don't understand what the X 285 means. :) Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/31/2023 11:05:00 AM Anne-Lise, I love the pic you posted with your poem. Perhaps you were wide awake as your beloved sleeps. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/31/2023 11:36:00 AM :))) - you're right ... I'm often up at night while everyone else is sleeping, Kim - hugs

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 7/31/2023 7:06:00 AM nice volta in this haiku..good luck in the contest, and thanks for commenting on my work :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/31/2023 9:54:00 AM - Thank you, Charlotte :) -

Joanna Daniel Date: 7/30/2023 10:37:00 PM Lovely!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/31/2023 5:50:00 AM - Thank you, Jo :) -

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 7/30/2023 5:11:00 PM Wonderful! The words, and the graphic! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/31/2023 5:50:00 AM - Thank you, Mala :) -

The Situation Date: 7/30/2023 4:12:00 PM It allows restfull sleep. I miss it. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/31/2023 5:50:00 AM - Thank you, T.S. :) -

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/30/2023 3:57:00 PM Ahh!!! The sleep induced by the steady soft sound of rain. Thanks for sharing this nice one and for dropping by my page. Sara Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/31/2023 5:50:00 AM - Thank you, Sara :) -

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 7/30/2023 2:48:00 PM An awesome haiku, Anne-Lise. Love the graphic, too. ;) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/31/2023 5:49:00 AM - Thank you, Evelyn :) -

Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/30/2023 2:37:00 PM What a fun/cute ~ write/picture. Love It. "Good Luck" I also did rain. Have a great day/week................... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/31/2023 5:49:00 AM - Thank you, Paula :) -

Ilene Bauer Date: 7/30/2023 2:26:00 PM nicely done, anne-lise! best of luck in the contest... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/31/2023 5:49:00 AM - Thank you, Ilene :) -