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30.07.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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clouds become heavy a complex rhythm of the rain - my beloved sleeps

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Date: 8/1/2023 5:17:00 PM
And its mist makes us sleepy, great (Gif) and haiku. I don't understand what the X 285 means. :)
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Date: 7/31/2023 11:05:00 AM
Anne-Lise, I love the pic you posted with your poem. Perhaps you were wide awake as your beloved sleeps.
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Date: 7/31/2023 11:36:00 AM
:))) - you're right ... I'm often up at night while everyone else is sleeping, Kim - hugs
Date: 7/31/2023 7:06:00 AM
nice volta in this haiku..good luck in the contest, and thanks for commenting on my work :)
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Date: 7/31/2023 9:54:00 AM
- Thank you, Charlotte :) -
Date: 7/30/2023 10:37:00 PM
Lovely!!
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Date: 7/31/2023 5:50:00 AM
- Thank you, Jo :) -
Date: 7/30/2023 5:11:00 PM
Wonderful! The words, and the graphic!
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Date: 7/31/2023 5:50:00 AM
- Thank you, Mala :) -
Date: 7/30/2023 4:12:00 PM
It allows restfull sleep. I miss it.
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Date: 7/31/2023 5:50:00 AM
- Thank you, T.S. :) -
Date: 7/30/2023 3:57:00 PM
Ahh!!! The sleep induced by the steady soft sound of rain. Thanks for sharing this nice one and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 7/31/2023 5:50:00 AM
- Thank you, Sara :) -
Date: 7/30/2023 2:48:00 PM
An awesome haiku, Anne-Lise. Love the graphic, too. ;)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/31/2023 5:49:00 AM
- Thank you, Evelyn :) -
Date: 7/30/2023 2:37:00 PM
What a fun/cute ~ write/picture. Love It. "Good Luck" I also did rain. Have a great day/week...................
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Date: 7/31/2023 5:49:00 AM
- Thank you, Paula :) -
Date: 7/30/2023 2:26:00 PM
nicely done, anne-lise! best of luck in the contest...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/31/2023 5:49:00 AM
- Thank you, Ilene :) -

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