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lace curtains of snow shadows are long - days are short - go there pepper grows * "there pepper grows" ... a warmer country, without winter or if you are really angry ... simply "go to hell" :) 05/11/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved A late Fall or Early Winter Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 5th place in the contest

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Mark Toney

Date: 11/9/2019 9:47:00 AM

Anne-Lise, I enjoyed your - Haiku X 166 - Snow - :) Congrats on your win and for the lovely image chosen. Where I live the average snowfall is zero inches. So I guess you can say where I live, "there pepper grows!" ;) ~Mark

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2019 1:48:00 PM

- Zero snow ... sounds wonderful, Mark :) - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/9/2019 1:37:00 AM

dropping back to say many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2019 1:42:00 PM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/8/2019 2:09:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2019 1:42:00 PM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 11/8/2019 11:56:00 AM

Congrats, Anne-Lise, for your win for this splendid verse. Always delighted to see you on the winner's list - Bob

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2019 1:41:00 PM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Bob :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 11/8/2019 5:27:00 AM

I liked this one the most I read in the contest. A juxtaposition and a unexpected ending that made me smile. Pepper is a great image) Congrats, S.S.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2019 1:47:00 PM

- Nice to hear, Kurt :) - Thank you very much for visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

Date: 11/7/2019 10:29:00 PM

A spicy ending indeed. Well done.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2019 1:45:00 PM

- A little spice in everyday life, Jean :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

Date: 11/7/2019 8:16:00 PM

Anna-Lisa. Wonderfully written!. Congrats on your win. Hugs // Charlie :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2019 1:40:00 PM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/7/2019 8:03:00 PM

Anne-Lise, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku, thanks for participating!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2019 1:44:00 PM

- Many thanks for my win in your contest, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2019 8:00:00 PM

nice imagery and picture with it and I learned a new expression. Congrats on the win.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2019 1:40:00 PM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/6/2019 3:31:00 AM

Short days: Long poetic delights! Excellent my dearest frie d, Anne-Lise. Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2019 7:40:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/5/2019 10:54:00 PM

The days sure are shorter now and with it being a gray sky day today with some rain, it seemed like evening in the afternoon. Well done Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2019 3:09:00 AM

- Many thanks Heidi, for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Foster

Date: 11/5/2019 6:51:00 PM

This was cold... and full of deeper emotions. Well written. Ann

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2019 3:09:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Ann :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/5/2019 12:57:00 PM

the image and your words paint this chilly scene well...we had temps of 27 the other day and they are talking possible snow showers this week...i am not ready for winter.... great penning... hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/5/2019 1:01:00 PM

- I'm NEVER ready for winter, Sandra ... but, it's coming - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 11/5/2019 11:31:00 AM

Images that will linger in memory, Sunshine ... The third line twist is worth enjoying ... A cool haiku ...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/5/2019 12:22:00 PM

- The third line " the surprise line" is always difficult, Probir ... glad you liked this one :) - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/5/2019 11:03:00 AM

lovely haiku I especially love the first line:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/5/2019 12:18:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/5/2019 10:57:00 AM

Hello Sunshine Smile, Question: Will the peppers melt the snow? The snow will soon come my way. Lovely poem. Have a nice day my friend. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/5/2019 11:23:00 AM

- No Darlene, pepper does not make the snow melt ... - but salt does :) - Where the pepper grows ... is warmer place than Norway ... a place I want to go when winter comes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/5/2019 9:49:00 AM

What a beautiful haiku, Sunshine! I bet this is just what Tania is looking for. Winning wishes for you! Hugs, Carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/5/2019 12:18:00 PM

- Carolyn, many thanks for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/5/2019 9:37:00 AM

Hi Anne- Lise, This is good "haiku" for the contest. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/5/2019 12:16:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/5/2019 9:08:00 AM

Vivid imagery, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/5/2019 12:12:00 PM

- Many thanks Vijay, for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/5/2019 8:24:00 AM

I got the chills just reading this my friend. Brrr-illiantly done. best wishes in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/5/2019 12:11:00 PM

- I get goose bumps just by thinking about the snow, Chris :) - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)