- Haiku X 166 - Snow -

lace curtains of snow

                            shadows are long - days are short

                                            -  go there pepper grows






* "there pepper grows" ... a warmer country, without winter 
    or if you are really angry ... simply "go to hell" :)

05/11/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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A late Fall or Early Winter Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
5th place in the contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 11/9/2019 9:47:00 AM
Anne-Lise, I enjoyed your - Haiku X 166 - Snow - :) Congrats on your win and for the lovely image chosen. Where I live the average snowfall is zero inches. So I guess you can say where I live, "there pepper grows!" ;) ~Mark
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:48:00 PM
- Zero snow ... sounds wonderful, Mark :) - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/9/2019 1:37:00 AM
dropping back to say many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:42:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/8/2019 2:09:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:42:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/8/2019 11:56:00 AM
Congrats, Anne-Lise, for your win for this splendid verse. Always delighted to see you on the winner's list - Bob
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:41:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Bob :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/8/2019 5:27:00 AM
I liked this one the most I read in the contest. A juxtaposition and a unexpected ending that made me smile. Pepper is a great image) Congrats, S.S.
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:47:00 PM
- Nice to hear, Kurt :) - Thank you very much for visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2019 10:29:00 PM
A spicy ending indeed. Well done.
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:45:00 PM
- A little spice in everyday life, Jean :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2019 8:16:00 PM
Anna-Lisa. Wonderfully written!. Congrats on your win. Hugs // Charlie :)
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:40:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2019 8:03:00 PM
Anne-Lise, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku, thanks for participating!
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:44:00 PM
- Many thanks for my win in your contest, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2019 8:00:00 PM
nice imagery and picture with it and I learned a new expression. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:40:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/6/2019 3:31:00 AM
Short days: Long poetic delights! Excellent my dearest frie d, Anne-Lise. Hugs xxx
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Date: 11/6/2019 7:40:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/5/2019 10:54:00 PM
The days sure are shorter now and with it being a gray sky day today with some rain, it seemed like evening in the afternoon. Well done Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/6/2019 3:09:00 AM
- Many thanks Heidi, for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/5/2019 6:51:00 PM
This was cold... and full of deeper emotions. Well written. Ann
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Date: 11/6/2019 3:09:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Ann :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/5/2019 12:57:00 PM
the image and your words paint this chilly scene well...we had temps of 27 the other day and they are talking possible snow showers this week...i am not ready for winter.... great penning... hugs :)
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Date: 11/5/2019 1:01:00 PM
- I'm NEVER ready for winter, Sandra ... but, it's coming - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/5/2019 11:31:00 AM
Images that will linger in memory, Sunshine ... The third line twist is worth enjoying ... A cool haiku ...
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Date: 11/5/2019 12:22:00 PM
- The third line " the surprise line" is always difficult, Probir ... glad you liked this one :) - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/5/2019 11:03:00 AM
lovely haiku I especially love the first line:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/5/2019 12:18:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/5/2019 10:57:00 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, Question: Will the peppers melt the snow? The snow will soon come my way. Lovely poem. Have a nice day my friend. Hugs.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/5/2019 11:23:00 AM
- No Darlene, pepper does not make the snow melt ... - but salt does :) - Where the pepper grows ... is warmer place than Norway ... a place I want to go when winter comes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/5/2019 9:49:00 AM
What a beautiful haiku, Sunshine! I bet this is just what Tania is looking for. Winning wishes for you! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 11/5/2019 12:18:00 PM
- Carolyn, many thanks for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/5/2019 9:37:00 AM
Hi Anne- Lise, This is good "haiku" for the contest. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/5/2019 12:16:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/5/2019 9:08:00 AM
Vivid imagery, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 11/5/2019 12:12:00 PM
- Many thanks Vijay, for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/5/2019 8:24:00 AM
I got the chills just reading this my friend. Brrr-illiantly done. best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 11/5/2019 12:11:00 PM
- I get goose bumps just by thinking about the snow, Chris :) - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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