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- Haiku X 10 - Time 00:00 -

Heaven lights up
                                     Air is filled with sulfur odor
                                           Beautiful fireworks




01.01.2013
A-L  ANDRESEN :)

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Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 8/1/2013 3:17:00 PM

Clever haiku dear Anne.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/1/2013 3:21:00 PM

- Thanks for your comments and your visit, Mustapha. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/8/2013 11:07:00 AM

Yes, Time starts from 00.00 giving good in one side and bad in another side. Heaven lights up but produces bad smell of burning sulfur. Oh! nice philosophy depicted in this exquisite haiku. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/8/2013 12:43:00 PM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, bl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Robert Heemstra

Date: 1/17/2013 3:34:00 PM

It was the title that caught my attention The wife and I just started watching the fourth season of "24." Thanks for your comments as well it's a different world out at sea

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/18/2013 2:18:00 AM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Robert. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Dan Kearley

Date: 1/14/2013 8:25:00 PM

Yes,yes... :o) oxox f.e.f <3

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2013 1:53:00 AM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Dan. - oxox / / f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)

Hannah Spencer

Date: 1/13/2013 7:44:00 AM

What lovely imagery and what a great way to greet a new year! Thanks for sharing :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/13/2013 9:34:00 AM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Hannah. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/11/2013 12:27:00 PM

Enjoyed this haiku. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/11/2013 12:35:00 PM

Thanks for visiting and Happy New Year, Phyllis! - @ - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 1/11/2013 4:02:00 AM

Oh, this is extremely fascinating poem to welcome the New Year my dearest Anne-Lise. Sorry I've missed to read it. Wishing you again all the best this new year! love always, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/11/2013 6:57:00 AM

Thanks for visiting and Happy New Year, Leonora! - @ - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

John Posey

Date: 1/9/2013 12:42:00 PM

Refreshing way to greet the new year...... With a Haiku.... Great write and thanks for your support for my work.... It means a lot to me..... Love You dearly.... Jake

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/9/2013 12:43:00 PM

Thanks for visiting and Happy New Year, John! - @ - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joann Grisetti

Date: 1/8/2013 3:44:00 PM

Happy New Year to you and Arild. I enjoy reading your poems.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/9/2013 1:34:00 AM

Thanks for visiting and Happy New Year, Joann! - @ - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ann Roske

Date: 1/7/2013 11:22:00 AM

I love your title - Happy New Year Anne Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2013 11:23:00 AM