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                       Cypress Gardens in Moncks Corner near North Charleston, South Carolina:

Breathe the scent peaceful The perfection on my tongue ... reverently kneel www.howmanysyllables.com 5-7-5 26.01.2017 - Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 3/11/2017 4:41:00 AM
You do such a great job of conveying the scene within the boundaries of the form. Excellent!
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Date: 3/11/2017 11:50:00 AM
- I love Haiku poems, John :) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/10/2017 6:39:00 PM
Nature does bring reverent awe at times. Only the senses can experience what words fail us to describe. Beautiful a 7. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 2/11/2017 6:17:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits a 7 and your comments, SuZ :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/10/2017 1:43:00 PM
Sunshine I like your nature poem.I am glad that you like my Owl poem.I gave your poem a7
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Date: 2/10/2017 2:05:00 PM
- I love the nature and animals, Darlene - Thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/3/2017 11:41:00 AM
Very beautiful Haiku Anne- Lise!:) Beautifully written poem, dear friend:) Delightful picture of nature as well!:)Just awesome! Enjoyed it! A 7! Sending you my love and prayers.Best wishes to you always!Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you always!:))Hugs!D
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Date: 2/3/2017 12:28:00 PM
- Thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/1/2017 1:06:00 PM
Wow a beautiful picture along with this awesome haiku. love phyl
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Date: 2/1/2017 1:26:00 PM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/29/2017 7:37:00 PM
Wow! Nice one! A meditation!
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Date: 2/1/2017 8:05:00 AM
Your welcome, Anne-Lise! xo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2017 8:05:00 AM
Your welcome, Anne-Lise! xo
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Date: 1/30/2017 2:21:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/28/2017 7:07:00 PM
You know, this would indeed be a beautiful place to kneel in worship, Anne-Lise!! Beautiful.
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Date: 1/29/2017 6:04:00 AM
- Andrea, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/27/2017 10:04:00 PM
Meaningful and perfect hugs Eve
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Date: 1/28/2017 7:01:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/27/2017 8:14:00 PM
Brilliantly beautiful my Dear...
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Date: 1/28/2017 7:01:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/27/2017 10:00:00 AM
Very nicely penned Sunshine
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Date: 1/27/2017 1:25:00 PM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/27/2017 9:08:00 AM
Breathtaking.
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Date: 1/27/2017 1:25:00 PM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/27/2017 6:01:00 AM
Both your poem and the picture are outstanding Anna-lise! So serene. : ) 7
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Date: 1/27/2017 7:20:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/27/2017 3:06:00 AM
I kneel before your Haiku dearest, Anne-Lise. A seven.
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Date: 1/27/2017 7:18:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/26/2017 11:20:00 AM
lovely 'ku; i feel this is a prayerful write, anne... happy huggs!
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Date: 1/26/2017 1:38:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/26/2017 10:13:00 AM
Looks like a great fishing hole:) That scent is so familiar, I can smell the mud from here. Lovely haiku, Anne Lise.
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Date: 1/26/2017 1:38:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/26/2017 8:17:00 AM
Very lovely A-L
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Date: 1/26/2017 1:37:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/26/2017 7:51:00 AM
Lovely peace and lovelier its beauty ...
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Date: 1/26/2017 7:59:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/26/2017 5:56:00 AM
Anne Lise, love the sweetness of your thought and words.. I'd want to be in the scene. :) And I'm sure your love story is wonderful too.. hug and smiles, Olive Eloisa :)
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Date: 1/26/2017 7:58:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Olive :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)