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- Green Tea Cleans Your Thoughts -

It was written on the facebook wall
                          What was your goal, you have no soul

                                     When you are armed,
                                      with your charmed

                                You live inside a pink bubble
                                 have no feelings of trouble

                   A love poem to someone you've never met ... gee
                             Take a cup of green Japanese tea

                                   Getting cheated isn’t fun
                            It's a sticky situation for everyone

                                      You've gone too far
                            You are happily married - au revoir

                       Don't blame the tea, you ought to have seen
               That everything became so incredible stupid and green













14.03.2019
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"Green" Humor Contest
Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire
4th place in the contest

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Arturo Michael Date: 4/9/2019 4:40:00 PM I read this again and you're right..." everything became so incredible stupid and green" Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/26/2019 6:04:00 PM Or maybe he acted more like the Hulk!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/27/2019 4:54:00 AM :))))

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/26/2019 6:04:00 PM I like your take on the green eyed monster using green tea. Congrats for your win! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/27/2019 4:55:00 AM - Many thanks Andrea, for the friendly visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus Date: 3/26/2019 11:19:00 AM Green tea can't be blamed for a sticky situation, Anne-Lise! On the contrary, it ought to clear the mind. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs // paul Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2019 11:41:00 AM - It is exactly what it does, Paul :) - Many thanks for the friendly visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray Date: 3/24/2019 4:45:00 PM Wonderful! I love that rolling rhyme kind of thing. Congratulations Anne-Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/25/2019 1:09:00 AM - Many thanks Jean, for the friendly visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 3/24/2019 1:18:00 PM Such a delightful and witty write, dear Anne Lise! Congratulations on for your well-deserved win and many thanks for your kind comments re my entry in the contest - Bob Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/25/2019 1:08:00 AM - Many thanks for the friendly visit and congratulations, Bob :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 3/24/2019 8:36:00 AM Well done Anne-Lise - revisiting to congratulate you on your win my friend. Poetry hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/24/2019 8:41:00 AM - Many thanks for congratulations, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/23/2019 8:39:00 PM You spun a witty yarn here, Sunshine. Enjoyed very much. Congratulations on your win! There were many great entries and judging is always a challenge. Best wishes, Carolyn Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/24/2019 8:26:00 AM - Many thanks for my place on your winning list, dear Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/16/2019 3:39:00 PM how witty, anne... i do take green tea no matter what facebook says, lol!... happy huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/16/2019 4:03:00 PM - I say no thanks to both :) - Many thanks Nette, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sheri Fresonke Harper Date: 3/15/2019 4:40:00 PM oh, Facebook, Anne-Lise, it can be challenging, at least it brings tea, I always enjoy a cup or iced glass both times of the year, enjoyed reading it Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/16/2019 1:09:00 PM - I never been on FB ... but I know it happens a lot of things there :))) - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Sheri :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne Date: 3/15/2019 10:01:00 AM love this playful write Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/15/2019 2:20:00 PM - Jack, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael Date: 3/15/2019 12:13:00 AM A tasty salad...like the freedom of expression and the bit of spice you added...All the best Anne-Lise Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/15/2019 2:19:00 PM - Many thanks Arturo, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 3/14/2019 8:27:00 PM Lots of bubbly good lines here S.S. winning wishes just for you, hugs xo Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/15/2019 2:19:00 PM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 3/14/2019 6:07:00 PM Nicely done Sunshine, I love it...:) Good luck in the contest.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/15/2019 6:21:00 AM - Many thanks for comment and your lovely visit, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman Date: 3/14/2019 4:53:00 PM All those recipes and remedies, Great poem..love it......Took a cab drive on a train on 'you tube' through Norway..wow i'm just blown away, with the beauty of the country, must take a trip after all my DNA says my family was originally viking... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/15/2019 6:20:00 AM The tourist boats are already here ... welcome to my beautiful country :) - http://avaldsnes.info/ .... https://opplevavaldsnes.no/ ... You will find this right outside my windows :) - Thanks for visiting and commenting, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/14/2019 1:41:00 PM Somebody got caught out, and no you can't blame the tea or anything else. Good luck Sunshine. Tom. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/14/2019 1:46:00 PM - He can blame himself, Tom :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 3/14/2019 12:10:00 PM Hi dear soul sister, green tea, very good for you - a lovely couplet. One day I bought a packet of green tea, but how did I not see (Anti- Constipation (in bold) on the packet! We had a meeting with one of our clients the next morning and needless to say i spent my time mostly in the loo, I had to excuse myself, and my husband had to do the work and talking for the two of us - I am wary of buying green tea in a hurry, since that day! Good luck in the contest. Poetry hugs Anne-Lise, Jennifer. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/14/2019 1:24:00 PM - Dear Jennifer, I'm critical of intestinal flushing ... I don't recommend it :))) - Be careful :) - Many thanks for the fun comment and your lovely visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/14/2019 9:27:00 AM Enjoyed the look and feel of green tea in your poem..best for a win, Anne-Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/14/2019 1:17:00 PM - The feeling of shame ... should be green, Vijay :) - Thanks for visiting and commenting :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 3/14/2019 8:46:00 AM I love drinking green tea Anne Lise! good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/14/2019 1:15:00 PM - I rarely drink tea Jan, but I have to have coffee :) - Thanks for visiting and commenting :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/14/2019 8:36:00 AM Refreshing as " ... a cup of green Japanese tea..." dearest, Anne-Lise! Hope my comment stays this time! Hugs xxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/14/2019 8:39:00 AM - I hope so as well :) - Many thanks my friend ... always welcome :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)