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Preface illustration by Dragan Bibin. Link to gallery of creepy illustrations.

I do not feel comfortable Why does the elevator move so slowly The light flashes ... the fourth floor Out in the gloomy hall that appears My mind is racing with impatient thoughts In all its decay a whisper among the other sounds of the night Mystery casts shadows The shadows of the past may have roots far back Eyes that see things that does not exist Maybe I should not listen to old stories I can still turn ... ("chicken") even though it is madness The back room - behind reality A door that leads to nowhere just a handful of dust under the sky *** 13.09.2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Eve Roper

Date: 9/17/2020 7:04:00 PM

Deep write , Sunshine, should I or should I not step and see what fate brings.. I am a chicken. :) love the write and good luck. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/20/2020 1:55:00 AM

- Many thanks Eve, for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/15/2020 6:34:00 AM

Scary and poetically perfect - No not chicken, it would take me a great deal of thought to go into that room! Love your write dear sister. Hugs and blessings Jenny

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/20/2020 1:55:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/13/2020 4:27:00 PM

"The back room - behind reality", Well penned Anne, best wishes, Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2020 12:12:00 PM

- Thank you very much for visiting and your comment on my poem, Joseph ... sometimes I wonder what is the reality :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/13/2020 4:08:00 PM

love the eerie feel of this write, anne... how can i sleep?.. congrats too on your monoku win!...huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2020 12:10:00 PM

- Thank you very much for visiting and your comment on my poem, Nette ... sleep safe ... dream of angels :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/13/2020 3:46:00 PM

Ooh! You've really spooked me with this write, Anne-Lise! G.L. in the contest! Thrills and chills, Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2020 12:09:00 PM

- Thank you very much for visiting and your comment on my poem, Gershon ... I find it interesting with "ghosts" :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 9/13/2020 12:03:00 PM

This is an excellent write, Anne-Lise!! The use of ‘stream of consciousness’ in this piece is so convincing, and the image chosen doubles up its impact on the subject.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2020 12:08:00 PM

- Thank you very much for visiting and your comment on my poem, Newton ... really appreciate your words :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/13/2020 11:42:00 AM

Hello Sunshine Smile, I have come across many doors that lead to nowhere. I am hoping one day to open a door to take me somewhere. I will keep on trying until that door opens wide for me. God Bless Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/15/2020 12:38:00 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile, I am always looking for the right door. I will find it. Enjoy your day my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2020 12:06:00 PM

- Thank you very much for visiting and your comment on my poem, Darlene ... one day you will find the right door :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/13/2020 8:59:00 AM

such an intriguing scenario Anne-Lise i love the way you build up the picture... makes me crave to know more:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2020 12:05:00 PM

- Thank you very much for visiting and your comment on my poem, Jan ... if you want to know more ... you have to walk in the door :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/13/2020 8:58:00 AM

A mystery all full of decay and shadows...love it!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2020 12:02:00 PM

- Thank you very much for visiting and your comment on my poem, Jeanne ... shadows into the unknown :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/13/2020 8:56:00 AM

It sounds scary, Anne-Lise..into the unknowns..All the best.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2020 12:00:00 PM

- Thank you very much for visiting and your comment on my poem, Vijay ... yes, a little scary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/13/2020 7:44:00 AM

A difficult subject. Wonder what others are writing. Maybe something from the Twilight Zone . ~~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2020 8:02:00 AM

- One topic ... everyone perceives it differently ... this was my contribution ... hope you enjoyed it, my friend Victor :) - Twilight Zone is a great suggestion :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)