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- Forever and Always -

I look past the stars and moon and space, past the dark of the night. Just to look and see your face, in a ray of light. A ray of light that gives me hope, when I am feeling low. Or just to speed up the day, because it's going slow. I want the day to be over, so that I can dream of you. Think about the times we had, before god came and took you. My dreams are filled with happy thoughts, of before you went away. It's like your still on Earth today, just in a better place. I miss you when I see the light, that brightens up my room. Then I remember you are gone, that you left with the moon. I wish that I could see your face, just one more time. Why didn't god take you away, when the time was right? He took you right after, we got in that stupid fight. I told you to go away, until another night. Well now there is no other night, for you are gone for good. I will always regret that light that took you from the world. Left when the light, shines into my room. Back in the night, when you left. I used to love the night, when the darkness filled my room. Now I always want the light, So I can't remember what I did to you. I blame myself for your death, though you're already gone. I didn't really hurt you, but it feels that way now. I hope you're better off, in a place far from me. Just please, oh please, don't forget me. I will always love you, even if you're gone. I'll never forget you, until my time is done. -This is a poem I made for my friend, Shaun. I miss you-

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Date: 9/23/2013 8:30:00 AM
Nice poem.
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Charity Lymmn
Date: 9/23/2013 3:23:00 PM
Thanks. -Lee
Date: 9/22/2013 7:05:00 PM
A very good ODE... , Wishing you the best when it comes to your writings, Charity. Congratulations on making the top, hottest, and best NEW poets on Poetry Soup list.... always & forever ~
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Charity Lymmn
Date: 9/23/2013 2:40:00 PM
Thanks for reading my poems, and for your nice comments. -Lee
Date: 9/22/2013 7:48:00 AM
Sentimental poem well written. I enjoyed the rhyme. JM
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Charity Lymmn
Date: 9/22/2013 4:50:00 PM
Thank you. -Lee