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Its official: I am an old fart

old man
                                             big plan

                                             ladies
                                             nineties

                                             big t*ts  (*i :)
                                             will fit

                                            toothless
                                            bootless

                                            his grief
                                            no kiss

                                            old date
                                            your fate

                                            time out
                                            he pouts





                                   Dedicated to Tom & Jan

                                          02.11.2020
                                   Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 12/7/2020 3:20:00 PM
Fun footles Anne-Lise, enjoyed thank you, Emilia : )
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Date: 12/8/2020 3:33:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Emilia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/13/2020 3:04:00 PM
G’day Anne-Lise … Tom and Jan like us readers will find your footle very amusing indeed - thanks Anne-Lise - Lindsay
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Date: 11/14/2020 7:50:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Lindsay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/5/2020 2:34:00 PM
I am sure you put a smile on their faces, Sunshine. Cute idea.
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Date: 11/6/2020 2:56:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/5/2020 4:50:00 AM
This is really funny Sunshine Smile - sure they both enjoyed the dedication, but reading down to the bottom I see they did. Sweet of you to think of doing it m y friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 11/5/2020 10:14:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/4/2020 2:42:00 PM
LOL! This is so adorably funny :)
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Date: 11/5/2020 10:14:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Akkina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/4/2020 1:05:00 AM
Fun footles, Anne-lise:)
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Date: 11/4/2020 1:51:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/3/2020 7:14:00 PM
I love the footles, Anne-Lise! A great dedication to Tom and Jan :)
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Date: 11/4/2020 1:51:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and comment, Angela :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/3/2020 12:11:00 PM
So sweet, Anne-Lise!!
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Date: 11/4/2020 1:50:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/3/2020 12:05:00 PM
LOL, I'm sure they loved these too : )
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Date: 11/4/2020 1:50:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Jack :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/3/2020 4:39:00 AM
And I am sure both will be gob smacked with happiness to see this dedication.
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Date: 11/4/2020 1:50:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/3/2020 4:02:00 AM
Love it... so cute :) God bless you sweet lady :)
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Date: 11/4/2020 1:49:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and comment, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/3/2020 1:04:00 AM
So long ass our two famous writers are happy...:) ~~
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Date: 11/3/2020 12:32:00 PM
- I did not know that they were famous writers ... omg. I may have offended them ... :))) - Be happy, my friend Victor :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/2/2020 11:21:00 PM
excellent choice. Anne-Lise, great footles
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Date: 11/3/2020 12:38:00 PM
- Harry, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/2/2020 6:16:00 PM
LOL, Anne-Lise! Nice dedication!
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Date: 11/3/2020 12:37:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/2/2020 4:39:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, This is a wonderful dedication piece to two amazing poets. Well done:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/3/2020 12:37:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/2/2020 1:29:00 PM
aww thanks so much Anne-lise these are fun:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/3/2020 12:36:00 PM
- I'm not that good at footle, Jan ... just for fun and you ... glad you liked this one :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/2/2020 12:37:00 PM
Haha love it Anne, thanks for the mention. Tom
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Date: 11/3/2020 12:34:00 PM
- Glad you enjoyed it, Tom ... thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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