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- Finding God -

She carries on a dream a dream that will take place in a beautiful glimpse That the rock will overflow with cream Hearts will be opened by the colorful light beams The dream and the doors opened tidal stream Desire is divine ... looking, she feel like scream One way she does not know ... a strange feeling The dream, heart, and the mountain redeems She found her savior, her God - believe in your dreams A-L Andresen : 09.08.2014 Copyright © All Rights Reserved Sponsor:Gail Angel Doyle Contest Name:Finding God - Thank you for my 11th place in the contest :)

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/25/2014 8:48:00 AM

Awesome, Anne Lise. Your poem purifies the mind. Love...rajat

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/25/2014 9:07:00 AM

- A pleasure to see you and thanks for the comments, Rajat - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aubrey Brown

Date: 9/30/2014 11:03:00 PM

Beautifully written. I love your writing style in this. very mysterious yet revealing.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/1/2014 2:24:00 AM

- A pleasure to see you and thanks for the comments, Aubrey - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Helen Grace Balisi

Date: 9/5/2014 10:41:00 PM

Hello Anne Lise??... I love this one...It is beautiful written - from the depth of your soul...Keep inspiring people through your writings!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2014 3:43:00 AM

- A pleasure to see you and thanks for the comments, Helen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/27/2014 9:07:00 AM

Exquisitel beautiful - congratulations on a wonderful win! Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/27/2014 10:29:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Pandita :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jt Nyx

Date: 8/18/2014 7:30:00 PM

Lovely Anne Lise, I enjoyed your poem and it's unique style. Take care my friend, Jess :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/19/2014 3:57:00 AM

- Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, my friend Jessica - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/16/2014 8:26:00 PM

Well now I have to say it Anne Lise, not only is this beautiful, but you have a unique style and way with words thats always paints such a vivid imagine and always brings me a smile, Your ability to pick so many topics and say such beautiful prose is well inspiring!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/17/2014 4:07:00 AM

- Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, my friend Arthur - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Diane Christian

Date: 8/16/2014 4:13:00 PM

amazing poem, its wonderful when people find God for the first time., thanks for your kind comments and support here on soup. its always appriciated. xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/17/2014 4:07:00 AM

- Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, my friend Diane - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan

Date: 8/15/2014 7:32:00 PM

Anne Lie that is such a beautiful poem, in my opinion you should have got a higher than 11th, so well written and understandable, take care my dear and have a lovely weekend..............Vera...........

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/16/2014 5:00:00 AM

- It is not so important for me ..... Enter to the contest for fun ...... win or "loss" with a smile :) - But it was nice said, dear Vera. - Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/15/2014 12:09:00 PM

here again for the applause, anne.. sweet congrats and huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2014 12:27:00 PM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/14/2014 9:03:00 PM

Congratulations, Anne Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2014 3:38:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Faye :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 8/14/2014 7:44:00 AM

A lovely poem on finding God. Yes God helps inner peace to last forever. Wow. Soo nice to read u again. Warmest hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/14/2014 11:38:00 AM

- Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, S.Z.K. - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ettie Christian-Bowling

Date: 8/13/2014 3:01:00 PM

A great poem this is:)-Love Ettie

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2014 3:05:00 PM

- Ettie, thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/13/2014 11:36:00 AM

A wonderful poem about finding God. Well done and congrats on the win. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2014 12:20:00 PM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit, dear Phyllis :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Van Breda

Date: 8/13/2014 9:25:00 AM

Indeed Anne-Lise... we need to believe in our Savior God and live our dreams through Him. Beautiful and serene... thank you for comments on my "Carpe Diem" poem. Yes... Robin Williams was a legendary actor-- now moved neighborhoods to live with His savior in heaven. Xx~Xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2014 10:53:00 AM

- Kim, thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 8/13/2014 8:27:00 AM

Absolutely stunningly beautiful!!!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2014 8:41:00 AM

- Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, my friend Monterey - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/13/2014 7:11:00 AM

Lovely n serene is this write Anne Lise, loved much! Congrats on fine win!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2014 7:13:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Dr.Upma :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ochieng Adipo

Date: 8/13/2014 6:56:00 AM

A really BEAUTIFUL piece! A beautiful dream indeed.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2014 7:03:00 AM

- Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, Ochieng - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/13/2014 1:36:00 AM

Congrats on the win on Finding God, Anne.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2014 4:22:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Dr. Ram :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/12/2014 9:32:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Anne Lise!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2014 4:22:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Robert :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

John Lawless

Date: 8/12/2014 6:24:00 PM

Congrats on the win Anne Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2014 4:21:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit, John :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/12/2014 3:22:00 PM

i knew this would be in the winners' list, anne... simply divine and sweet congrats on fantastic win!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2014 4:21:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/12/2014 2:38:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2014 4:20:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Jan :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/11/2014 11:31:00 AM

more dreams to you today, anne.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/12/2014 2:11:00 AM

- Enjoyable ............... :) huggs :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/11/2014 7:32:00 AM

This is good Anne Lise. We can all find God if we really look for him. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for the visit... Lucilla

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2014 7:54:00 AM

- Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, dear Lucilla - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/11/2014 5:35:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this one today..Glad that I chose it to read..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Yes, plastic is real(Ha! Ha!) in a sense but not the flesh and blood real..Amazing how when we get a little age on us things look different from a distance..Many things trick the eye..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2014 6:17:00 AM

- Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, dear Sara - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)