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- Finding God -

She carries on a dream
    a dream that will take place in a beautiful glimpse

    That the rock will overflow with cream
    Hearts will be opened by the colorful light beams

    The dream and the doors opened tidal stream
    Desire is divine ... looking, she feel like scream

    One way she does not know ... a strange feeling
    The dream, heart, and the mountain redeems

    She found her savior, her God - believe in your dreams





     A-L Andresen : 09.08.2014

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    Sponsor:Gail Angel Doyle 
    Contest Name:Finding God 
    

    - Thank you for my 11th place in the contest :)

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 10/25/2014 8:48:00 AM Awesome, Anne Lise. Your poem purifies the mind. Love...rajat Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/25/2014 9:07:00 AM - A pleasure to see you and thanks for the comments, Rajat - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aubrey Brown Date: 9/30/2014 11:03:00 PM Beautifully written. I love your writing style in this. very mysterious yet revealing. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/1/2014 2:24:00 AM - A pleasure to see you and thanks for the comments, Aubrey - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Helen Grace Balisi Date: 9/5/2014 10:41:00 PM Hello Anne Lise??... I love this one...It is beautiful written - from the depth of your soul...Keep inspiring people through your writings! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/6/2014 3:43:00 AM - A pleasure to see you and thanks for the comments, Helen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 8/27/2014 9:07:00 AM Exquisitel beautiful - congratulations on a wonderful win! Pandita Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/27/2014 10:29:00 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Pandita :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jessica Thompson Date: 8/18/2014 7:30:00 PM Lovely Anne Lise, I enjoyed your poem and it's unique style. Take care my friend, Jess :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/19/2014 3:57:00 AM - Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, my friend Jessica - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso Date: 8/16/2014 8:26:00 PM Well now I have to say it Anne Lise, not only is this beautiful, but you have a unique style and way with words thats always paints such a vivid imagine and always brings me a smile, Your ability to pick so many topics and say such beautiful prose is well inspiring! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/17/2014 4:07:00 AM - Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, my friend Arthur - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Diane Christian Date: 8/16/2014 4:13:00 PM amazing poem, its wonderful when people find God for the first time., thanks for your kind comments and support here on soup. its always appriciated. xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/17/2014 4:07:00 AM - Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, my friend Diane - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan Date: 8/15/2014 7:32:00 PM Anne Lie that is such a beautiful poem, in my opinion you should have got a higher than 11th, so well written and understandable, take care my dear and have a lovely weekend..............Vera........... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/16/2014 5:00:00 AM - It is not so important for me ..... Enter to the contest for fun ...... win or "loss" with a smile :) - But it was nice said, dear Vera. - Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/15/2014 12:09:00 PM here again for the applause, anne.. sweet congrats and huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/15/2014 12:27:00 PM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Faye Gibson Date: 8/14/2014 9:03:00 PM Congratulations, Anne Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/15/2014 3:38:00 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Faye :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Date: 8/14/2014 7:44:00 AM A lovely poem on finding God. Yes God helps inner peace to last forever. Wow. Soo nice to read u again. Warmest hugs. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/14/2014 11:38:00 AM - Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, S.Z.K. - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ettie Christian-Bowling Date: 8/13/2014 3:01:00 PM A great poem this is:)-Love Ettie Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/13/2014 3:05:00 PM - Ettie, thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock Date: 8/13/2014 11:36:00 AM A wonderful poem about finding God. Well done and congrats on the win. love phyl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/13/2014 12:20:00 PM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, dear Phyllis :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Van Breda Date: 8/13/2014 9:25:00 AM Indeed Anne-Lise... we need to believe in our Savior God and live our dreams through Him. Beautiful and serene... thank you for comments on my "Carpe Diem" poem. Yes... Robin Williams was a legendary actor-- now moved neighborhoods to live with His savior in heaven. Xx~Xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/13/2014 10:53:00 AM - Kim, thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak Date: 8/13/2014 8:27:00 AM Absolutely stunningly beautiful!!!!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/13/2014 8:41:00 AM - Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, my friend Monterey - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 8/13/2014 7:11:00 AM Lovely n serene is this write Anne Lise, loved much! Congrats on fine win! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/13/2014 7:13:00 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Dr.Upma :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ochieng Adipo Date: 8/13/2014 6:56:00 AM A really BEAUTIFUL piece! A beautiful dream indeed. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/13/2014 7:03:00 AM - Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, Ochieng - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/13/2014 1:36:00 AM Congrats on the win on Finding God, Anne. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/13/2014 4:22:00 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Dr. Ram :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley Date: 8/12/2014 9:32:00 PM Congrats on your win, Anne Lise!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/13/2014 4:22:00 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Robert :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

John Lawless Date: 8/12/2014 6:24:00 PM Congrats on the win Anne Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/13/2014 4:21:00 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, John :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/12/2014 3:22:00 PM i knew this would be in the winners' list, anne... simply divine and sweet congrats on fantastic win!.. huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/13/2014 4:21:00 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 8/12/2014 2:38:00 PM dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/13/2014 4:20:00 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Jan :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/11/2014 11:31:00 AM more dreams to you today, anne.. huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/12/2014 2:11:00 AM - Enjoyable ............... :) huggs :)

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 8/11/2014 7:32:00 AM This is good Anne Lise. We can all find God if we really look for him. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for the visit... Lucilla Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/11/2014 7:54:00 AM - Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, dear Lucilla - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/11/2014 5:35:00 AM Enjoyed reading this one today..Glad that I chose it to read..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Yes, plastic is real(Ha! Ha!) in a sense but not the flesh and blood real..Amazing how when we get a little age on us things look different from a distance..Many things trick the eye..Sara Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/11/2014 6:17:00 AM - Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, dear Sara - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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