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                                        the white painted gate

                                   two deciduous trees as a frame

                          _ many roadless memories ...

                                   _ gray concrete - stealing the nature

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08/11/2019
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Kai Michael Neumann Date: 12/27/2019 5:31:00 AM Wow. I like that. The poem hurts and that is good. Happy New Year, Kai Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 8:06:00 AM - Many thanks Kai, for your kind visit and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 11/10/2019 7:33:00 AM I dislike concrete jungles and especially when land is poached and encroached upon, chasing away fauna, and killing flora. Love your poem dear soul sister. Hugs and blessings Jennifer. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/10/2019 7:40:00 AM - Gray concrete jungles is awfully ugly ... - Many thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One Date: 11/9/2019 11:08:00 AM You described the concrete jungle very well.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/10/2019 6:51:00 AM - Many thanks for your kind visit and your comments, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams Date: 11/9/2019 7:27:00 AM so sad to see them constantly taking nature away and replacing it...the wildlife has nowhere to play and they wonder why bear walk in our backyards... good one Anne-Lise... have a great weekend! hugs :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/10/2019 6:50:00 AM - Many thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile Date: 11/9/2019 7:13:00 AM Well structured! ( pun intended!) I so agree with your expression, Great write and good luck in the contest Anne-Lise xxoo Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/10/2019 6:50:00 AM - Many thanks Mike, for your kind visit and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven Date: 11/8/2019 8:18:00 PM Hi Anne-Lise, this is an excellent write. We are taking too much of nature away, through building such monstrosities. It reads like a winner to me Anne-Lise. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/10/2019 6:49:00 AM - Many thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/8/2019 7:58:00 PM GOOD writing. Good message. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/10/2019 6:49:00 AM - Many thanks Andrea, for your kind visit and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger Date: 11/8/2019 2:41:00 PM Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/10/2019 6:48:00 AM - Many thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 11/8/2019 2:14:00 PM I can feel it--you dislike the structure--it sure doesn't look pleasing! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/10/2019 6:48:00 AM - Many thanks Vijay, for your kind visit and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands Date: 11/8/2019 1:43:00 PM Well done Anne-Lise! :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/8/2019 1:45:00 PM - Many thanks Heidi, for your kind visit and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green Date: 11/8/2019 1:27:00 PM Nicely done my friend. I can feel the angst in this. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/8/2019 1:35:00 PM - The concrete is ugly  ... and makes long, cold shadows Chris ... we must take care of nature, enjoy the sunrise and sunset - Many thanks for your kind visit and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)