- East of the Sun and West of the Moon-

Touch my soul and make me whole again
  Do you remember when we kissed

  I stretch myself to you in my dreams where you are near
  You make my heart burn inside with your lovely smile

  In distant horizons awaits an adventure both wants to experience
  From turmoil to harmony .... that calms my heart

  The earth is round our journey can last an eternity together in love
  Follow you're heart - and you can never go wrong. 

  In the rose garden many candles lit - in a heart shape
  A glimpse of eternity .... no condemnation

  Don’t you ever let the sun go down until you kiss me again
  East of the Sun and West of the Moon - In the Sorie Moria Castle



18.03.2014
A-L Andresen :)



(1th in the contest)

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Date: 3/25/2014 6:36:00 AM
I really enjoyed it. its a great and wellwritten poem + thanks for leaving a comment on my work. -gentlepen
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Date: 3/25/2014 11:59:00 AM
Thanks for your nice visits and comments on my poem,Kareem. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/24/2014 7:31:00 PM
A very romantic and heartfelt write that was filled with lovely imagery! Very nicely done, Anne Lise! Congratulations on your win, as well! :)
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Date: 3/25/2014 3:12:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting & congratulations, Kelly ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/23/2014 7:07:00 PM
This is a great poem Anne Lise. I enjoyed it very much. Many blessings and thanks for the visit to my page... Lucilla
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Date: 3/24/2014 4:33:00 AM
- I'm glad you liked my poem:) - Thanks for your kind visit and nice comments, Lucilla. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/23/2014 6:06:00 AM
super and romantic Anne Lise congrats on win hugs
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Date: 3/23/2014 6:09:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting & congratulations, Shadow ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/22/2014 10:50:00 PM
What a beautiful piece A-L .... Congratulations on your win....Tim
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Date: 3/23/2014 6:06:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting & congratulations, Tim ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/22/2014 10:30:00 PM
Congratulations Anne Lise..this amazing romantic write swept us off our feet...beautiful...
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Date: 3/23/2014 6:05:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting & congratulations, Donna ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/22/2014 8:45:00 AM
Hi, I was swept along with your super romantic theme. Congrats on your win. Regards Theresa xx
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Date: 3/22/2014 2:22:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting & congratulations, Theresa ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/22/2014 7:16:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful! From your pen flows pure romance.
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Date: 3/22/2014 2:23:00 PM
- I'm glad you liked my poem, Monterey :) - Thanks for your kind visit and nice comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/22/2014 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win for your latest poem, anne
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Date: 3/22/2014 2:21:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting & congratulations, Dr. Ram. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/22/2014 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations on this great write and win my dear friend Anne Lise. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your precious gem. Thank u so much for sharing and your loving support in my contest. Big warm hugs! Love lots, Leonora
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Date: 3/22/2014 2:19:00 PM
- Thanks for my win in your contest, dear friend Leonora! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/22/2014 5:45:00 AM
The title of your poem is outstanding so is the poem itself and thank you for reading my poems
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Date: 3/22/2014 2:18:00 PM
- I'm glad you liked my poem:) - Thanks for your kind visit and nice comments, Keith. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/21/2014 10:23:00 PM
this is a beauty!!
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Date: 3/22/2014 5:23:00 AM
- I'm glad you liked my poem, Andrea:) - Thanks for your kind visit and nice comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/21/2014 3:57:00 PM
Oh... such a sweet poem indeed!!! ...I wish I could make a poem like this one day... I can sense that you're in love, Anne Lise... wasn't it???,.,I can't remember the last time my heart beats like this.... I feel like I'm a teenager again!!! ..this is soooooo nice...so great!!! ...^__^ lovelots!!! :)))
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Date: 3/21/2014 4:01:00 PM
- "I can't remember the last time my heart beats like this.... " ...neither do I :))) - I'm glad you liked my poem, AiyaH :) - Thanks for your kind visit and nice comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/21/2014 3:56:00 PM
So well written Anne Lise. Great job! Take care!
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Date: 3/21/2014 3:59:00 PM
- I'm glad you liked my poem, Vincent :) - Thanks for your kind visit and nice comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/21/2014 3:05:00 PM
Fine write Anne!
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Date: 3/21/2014 3:58:00 PM
- I'm glad you liked my poem, Keith :) - Thanks for your kind visit and nice comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2014 3:07:00 PM
romance floats east and west of the sun, anne.. how beautiful!.. almost friday!.. huggs!
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Date: 3/20/2014 4:26:00 PM
- I'm glad you liked my poem, Nette :) - Thanks for your kind visit and nice comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2014 2:31:00 PM
Lovely poem,I really enjoyed it,Kate
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Date: 3/20/2014 2:58:00 PM
- I'm glad you liked my poem, Kate :) - Thanks for your kind visit and nice comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2014 12:56:00 PM
Cool heart becomes warm with lovely kiss of true lover and from turmoil to harmony is finest destination. Loved much this beautiful poem of nice feeling, my lovely lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 3/20/2014 2:57:00 PM
- I'm glad you liked my poem, - Thanks for your kind visit and nice comments, bl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2014 12:22:00 PM
I can dig it! I like to think of myself as an erotica writer, so I appreciate this poem. Well written and full of loving emotion. I would love to collaborate, seems we have an affinity for the romantic side of life!! if interested inbox me!! Great work friend!!Asavvy1
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Date: 3/20/2014 2:56:00 PM
- I'm glad you liked my poem, Jared:) - Thanks for your kind visit and nice comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2014 8:43:00 AM
This is simply beautiful :) Maxine xx
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Date: 3/20/2014 8:49:00 AM
- I'm glad you liked my poem, Maxine:) - Thanks for your kind visit and nice comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2014 3:50:00 PM
You are a romantic soul, Anne-Lise :) May you both go to the moon and back, lol! Enjoyed!
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Date: 3/20/2014 3:43:00 AM
- Thanks for your kind visit and nice comments, my friend Toquyen - I'm glad you liked my poem :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2014 2:21:00 PM
Ahh!! Romatic..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 3/19/2014 2:40:00 PM
- Thanks for your kind visit and nice comments - I'm glad you liked my poem, Sara :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2014 1:31:00 PM
A most lovely write Anne!
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Date: 3/19/2014 2:40:00 PM
- Thanks for your kind visit and nice comments, Ken - I'm glad you liked my poem :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2014 1:10:00 PM
Wowa. You took me to heaven. What an incredible write I love it. Your talent shouts from the page. Love the title. Very well done Andrea. Much enjoyed. Take care best wishes. Pete.
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Date: 3/19/2014 1:24:00 PM
- I'm glad you liked my poem, Peter ..... but, my name is: ANNE-LISE :) )
Date: 3/19/2014 9:02:00 AM
Lovely. Beautiful words. ~Teresa
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Date: 3/19/2014 12:28:00 PM
- Thanks for your kind visit and nice comments - I'm glad you liked my poem, Teresa :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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