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- Darkness of Hell -

the devil's long claws
                                   flames light up the direction -
                                   sins written with blood

                                   amputated souls
                                   hyenas herd with putrid breath -
                                   gulps up sour green bile



                                               26.03.2023
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Sara Kendrick Date: 3/27/2023 2:13:00 PM Great imagination in this one. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest to me. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/1/2023 12:30:00 PM - Thank you so much, Sara :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 3/27/2023 5:09:00 AM Your words are strong and riveting impressions the soul, Anne, how delicate we are as humans xo Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/27/2023 11:32:00 AM - The words may be strong ... but what and where is hell, Vie Rose ... God will not punish us humans with eternal torment - hugs

Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/27/2023 3:55:00 AM Amputated souls…heartbreaking! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/27/2023 11:29:00 AM - Thank you for your comment, Kim :) - hugs

Bj Legros Kelley Date: 3/27/2023 3:21:00 AM This is terrifying. Well written. I may... sleep with my light on tonight, and pray! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/27/2023 11:29:00 AM - Sleep safe and good ... I don't think there is a hell as we humans describe it, BJ - Thank you for your comment :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar Date: 3/27/2023 1:36:00 AM Woe. Great haikus. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/27/2023 11:24:00 AM - Thank you so much, Victor :) - hugs

Gershon Wolf Date: 3/26/2023 7:04:00 PM Here's a great way to lose weight! Just read your haiku before sitting down to eat... You may not even get to the 'sitting down' part!! ~ Toss it and Flush it Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/27/2023 11:24:00 AM - We are not suffering ... you can eat food later, Gershon :))) - Thanks for reading my nasty poem - hugs

Beryl Edmonds Date: 3/26/2023 5:37:00 PM A fantastic Haiku Anne-Lise - though I hope I’ve been good enough to keep me out of that terrifying place… Belle Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/27/2023 11:21:00 AM - Let's hope so, Belle :) - Many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/26/2023 1:34:00 PM You have brought Hell to life with this vivid writing, my dearest friend, Anne-Lise. One has to think twice before he does something evil. Excellent! God bless you. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/27/2023 11:20:00 AM - Demetrios, many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Alexis Y. Date: 3/26/2023 11:45:00 AM Wow! Anne-Lise, I agree with my fellow poets below. You have penned such a descriptive, dark, and scary write. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day my friend-Alexis Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2023 11:55:00 AM - Heaven and hell is a difficult subject Alexis, both for thought and for our feelings - Who will be saved and who will be lost ? - Thank you for your comment :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/26/2023 9:57:00 AM Powerful image Anne, one place I don't plan on going to, there's a place reserved for Putin though. Tom Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2023 11:37:00 AM - The dead are unconscious and therefore cannot feel pain, Tom ... he deserves a completely different punishment - Thank you for your comment :) - hugs

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 3/26/2023 9:32:00 AM This scary poem deserves a first place in the contest, the fact that I recognize it as very scary and so does everyone else, tells me what excellent poetry it is. Best of luck in the contest POETRY SIS! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2023 11:45:00 AM - We don't know what happens after death dear Jenny, but what we do know is that a lot of people have been frightened by a terrible vision of hell :) - Thank you for your comment :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel Date: 3/26/2023 8:20:00 AM A fearful picture, Anne-lise, but then, that's true of hell:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2023 11:35:00 AM The Bible says nothing about eternal torment in an inferno hell...that is man's imagination, Jo - Thank you for your comment :) - hugs

Daniel Turner Date: 3/26/2023 8:16:00 AM Very dark and scary, Anne. I suppose thats the whole point. Not hard to imagine with your descrptive paintings. Good luck! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2023 11:30:00 AM - Many believe that hell is a place where the wicked are punished with eternal fire ... I don't know, Daniel :) - Thank you for your comment :) - hugs