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- Better World For All -


                   Behind the seven great mountains with sugar tops on
              There lies the valley where there is only love and happiness
                      There are not many who know these mountains
                       and rather few people know about this valley
                     The birds are singing so beautiful all year round
                  The flowers make themselves attractive to all the bees
                        People live in a wonderful harmony with love
                      No unfriendliness, no jealousy, no hard feelings
            This valley is like a little mini paradise, where everyone is happy
                      In happiness and love grow only the best of the best
                I've been searching for this valley all my life without finding it
               If we all were looking together maybe we will find a better world






22.01.2013
A-L  Andresen :)

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/30/2013 2:28:00 AM

i hit on a jackpot wjile searching for some poems i haven't read yet, anne.. this paradise exists if we all make it so; what a splendid write with lines that flow... you inspire!..;) huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/30/2013 2:36:00 AM

Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud
Date: 5/30/2013 2:29:00 AM

and sweet congrats!..:)

Red Omara

Date: 3/13/2013 3:38:00 PM

What a beautiful thought about a beautiful place, Anne Lise. I'd love you to find it. - Red

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/13/2013 4:11:00 PM

Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Red. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 3/2/2013 1:51:00 PM

Well, Anne, I will go with you in search, and we shall have a grand time on our journey to this magical place ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/3/2013 2:23:00 AM

We must look into our hearts and become better people, Debbie. - - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/26/2013 1:12:00 PM

Sounds like a wonderful place, Anne-Lise! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/26/2013 1:18:00 PM

Thanks for congratulations, Kim! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/25/2013 6:07:00 PM

Congratulation on your win. Nicely done Anne. Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2013 11:20:00 PM

Thanks for congratulations, Connie! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David Williams

Date: 2/25/2013 1:42:00 PM

Anna Lise congrats on your win with this little gem, great idyllic picture...David

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2013 1:43:00 PM

Thanks for congratulations, David! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Painted Hunter

Date: 2/25/2013 7:19:00 AM

Lemme know if you come across it! Congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2013 7:23:00 AM

Thanks for congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/24/2013 9:40:00 PM

Anne, , thank you for SUPPORTING MY NEWEST contest...CONGRATULATIONS on your awesome win ;-) LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2013 7:23:00 AM

Thanks for congratulations! - Thanks for letting me join. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 2/19/2013 8:37:00 PM

my fav poetess Anne lise :) thank you for sharing your amazing talent :) enjoyed so much your great sharing <3 much luv and hugs :) Sk

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/20/2013 12:49:00 AM

- <3- Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Sukmawati. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Dan Kearley

Date: 2/12/2013 2:55:00 PM

What a joy that would be..It's nice to feel the love <3

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/13/2013 1:40:00 AM

Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Dan. - oxox f.e.f. / / Anne-Lise :)

Saleem Durrani

Date: 2/3/2013 1:33:00 PM

I just love the way you have so beautifully imagined how it would be, if we all could get together and search for this valley of paradise. The message is deep down in our hearts where we should be looking and then creating this passage for others to enter embrace and create a better world for all. Lovely poem Anne Lisa - oxoxo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/3/2013 2:03:00 PM

You have interpreted my poem so good and right, Saleem. - - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

April Mitchell

Date: 2/1/2013 4:36:00 AM

Message very powerful and the words well picked and brought together love this poem i hope others perceive it for what it means

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2013 5:50:00 AM

It will also I hope, April. - We must look into our hearts and become better people. - - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/28/2013 6:35:00 PM

Lets hold hands and find this Utopia together. Lovely poem Anne-lise. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/29/2013 2:41:00 AM

We must look into our hearts and become better people, Phyllis. - - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2013 4:54:00 PM

It's Shangri La!! Wish we could all find it, sweetie.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/28/2013 2:59:00 AM

We must look into our hearts and become better people, Andrea. - - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/27/2013 3:39:00 PM

Who would not want to live in this wonderful place....if only this were possible. But we can always hope that in the future there is a paradise such as this. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/28/2013 2:58:00 AM

I hope everyone will find this "peaceful valley", Carrie. - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/26/2013 10:42:00 AM

Excellent expectation. My sweet friend, I feel there is a world of which your dream depicts. In our world, it's totally impossible at present due to hundreds of reasons. Where all the people are perfect there this world may be. Thanks for all the comments. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/26/2013 11:18:00 AM

We must look into our hearts and become better people, bl. - - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 1/25/2013 4:37:00 AM

Your beautiful poem describes a beautiful place.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/25/2013 4:43:00 AM

I hope everyone will find this "peaceful valley", Vesna. - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/24/2013 5:30:00 PM

I also wish we could find that valley here, Anne Lise..that day will come! It's a wonderful poem but a heart that loves. Great job! Love and hugs, Annalise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2013 6:57:00 PM

We must look into our hearts and become better people, Annalise. - - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/24/2013 9:49:00 AM

So true Anne Lise, this is such a beautiful gem. So much promise as well. I hope your week has been a great one thus far. Have a fab weekend ahead ;) love & hugs Wilma xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2013 11:09:00 AM

A good place to be, wish the world was "free" for weapons and war. - Thank you for taking the time to read it, Wilma. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan

Date: 1/24/2013 7:43:00 AM

Shangri-La? I hope you find it. If you do, please let me know where it is. I would love to live there. Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2013 11:09:00 AM

I hope everyone will find this "peaceful valley", Jack . - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 1/24/2013 7:08:00 AM

Nice to live in this place... so cool, so peaceful..a very beautiful image you paint my dear Anne Lise. thanks for sharing..Hugs, Maria :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2013 7:12:00 AM

A good place to be, wish the world was "free" for weapons and war. - Thank you for taking the time to read it, Maria. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 1/24/2013 4:06:00 AM

I eagerly want to be the part of that valley, must be a great life to have an environment like that :D really nice inspiration Anne, I enjoyed to read this poem :) - hug, yanny

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2013 6:28:00 AM

I hope everyone will find this "peaceful valley", Yanny. - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)