- Autumn Silver Gloss Small Pearls -

Raindrops roll on my window
                                             like tears on a cheek
                                           The day is gray and wet
                                            but you are still beautiful
                                         Outside my window I have a
                                    rose bush with many raindrops on.
                                          Raindrops looks like many
                                           sliver gloss small pearls
                                           They can not be picked
                                              you get no bouquet                     
                                       A small spider web between
                                           some branches are also          
                                embellished with sliver gloss small pearls
                                    Yet there are two roses on my bush
                                         one for you and one for me
                                             The day gray and wet
                                               and autumn is here
                                             Still have my rose bush
                                          their beauty and ornaments





11.09.2012
A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 1/28/2013 11:15:00 AM
simple and beautiful.....enjoyed reading..
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Date: 1/28/2013 11:22:00 AM
Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Mehnaz. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/5/2013 7:15:00 PM
Lovely Anne ;} I want some pearls,,, some for you and some for me ;} xoxoxo's Debbie ;}
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Date: 1/6/2013 4:21:00 AM
Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Debbie. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/14/2012 7:33:00 AM
I Love this so much! Beautiful..JL
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Date: 10/14/2012 10:31:00 AM
Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Juniper. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2012 10:30:00 PM
A beautiful moment sculpted with words into full relief... Really nice. Thanks!!!
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Date: 10/5/2012 1:12:00 AM
Thank you for visiting my poem and wrote comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/20/2012 2:35:00 PM
Great imagery. Loved it.
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Date: 9/20/2012 2:42:00 PM
Carol, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/20/2012 1:06:00 PM
wow!!superb write my friend Anne Lise...I like your poem...thanks for sharing before i sleep..(^_^) oh wish it raining here....hugs!!
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Date: 9/20/2012 1:39:00 PM
Maria, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/19/2012 10:13:00 PM
Why? Thank you, Anne-Lise for the rose. So special. I can just imagine what the roses look like with rain drops on them. Beautiful. Love roses. Love you, Toquyen
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Date: 9/20/2012 4:21:00 AM
Toquyen, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/19/2012 5:42:00 PM
nice Anne Lise,,,,, always like reading your poems XOXO's
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Date: 9/20/2012 4:20:00 AM
And I'm always glad for your visit and comments Debbie. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/19/2012 12:53:00 PM
Anne Lise; this is very beautiful. I can just picture the rose bush with so many rain drops. Thanks for sharing and also for being so nice. Lucilla
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Date: 9/19/2012 2:53:00 PM
Lucilla, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/18/2012 11:37:00 AM
Beautiful poem. I'm surprised I haven't read this or commented on this before. Excellent work.
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Date: 9/18/2012 2:19:00 PM
Jon, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/16/2012 11:33:00 PM
Pearls that cannot be picked need to be enjoyed in the moment. These visions you paint with words are to be treasured also. Well done dear. Chuck
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/17/2012 11:58:00 AM
Chuck, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/16/2012 5:09:00 PM
You isolated a moment and turned it into powerful imagery! I can see each and every drop of dew and the veins of the spider web too! I love this....wow! gwendolen
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Date: 9/17/2012 11:57:00 AM
Gwen, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/13/2012 3:27:00 PM
You paint autumn with such beauty, the season was never decorated quite this way before!
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Date: 9/14/2012 1:19:00 AM
Elizabeth, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/13/2012 3:15:00 PM
Beautiful, sensitive writing, dear Anne Lisa. I just heard a few drops hit my dining room window, which added to your fine poem. Love, daver
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Date: 9/14/2012 1:18:00 AM
Daver, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise ;)
Date: 9/13/2012 9:59:00 AM
I love this Anne Lise! Your description of the raindrops falling on the rose bush and on the spider web serves to remind us that some things are truly a universal gift. Nice!
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Date: 9/13/2012 10:57:00 AM
Vicky, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/13/2012 9:13:00 AM
pearly greetings on this lovely thursday moment, anne.. huggles to you!..:)
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Date: 9/13/2012 10:56:00 AM
Nette, thank you for visit - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/13/2012 8:57:00 AM
What a lovely poem my dear friend! I have enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you also for taking your time in reading mine. Have a blessed and grace-filled day always!!! luv and hugs:) leonora
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Date: 9/13/2012 10:55:00 AM
Leonora, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/13/2012 7:10:00 AM
Very beautiful work....thanks for checking out my poetry.
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Date: 9/13/2012 7:12:00 AM
Doris, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/12/2012 3:10:00 PM
you get the real man from a place called heaven lol. there all angels from that place ;) loved the write :)
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Date: 9/12/2012 3:13:00 PM
Elizabeth, thank you for visit and comment my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/12/2012 10:39:00 AM
roses are beautiful. A beautiful expressed poem.I enjioyed reding it. God bless you. Hugs! Erich
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Date: 9/12/2012 10:52:00 AM
Erich, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/12/2012 9:25:00 AM
wow, anne...your images come together, like a sweet song...i am totally enthralled by the delicate beauty of your images-- the raindrops falling on rose bushes and all... your are wonderful flower; a sure favorite for me... enchanting!... happy day!..:) huggs!
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Date: 9/12/2012 10:51:00 AM
Nette, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/12/2012 9:15:00 AM
I love the beauty in this poem...I found it odd thou??? Because for one...We have a rose bush with 2 roses on it also? One full one,and one smaller one just blooming? And the second....Sometime back I was walking past it,and stopped to look at it after a rain.Woudn't you know? Same thoughts? That is to cute...I love the poem. :o) oxox
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Date: 9/12/2012 10:50:00 AM
The same thought and idea .... - thank you my f.e.f. for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/12/2012 9:13:00 AM
This is a beautiful visual write. One of my favorite. Amazing Imagry.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/12/2012 10:47:00 AM
Jay, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/12/2012 8:40:00 AM
I like how you always see the positive - I bet that pop of color is beautiful :)
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Date: 9/12/2012 10:46:00 AM
B.E.S. - thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/12/2012 6:39:00 AM
Lovely just one fly in the ointment for me ... spider web, that mean spider. lovely verse though well done and thanks for xx all you up building comments
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Date: 9/12/2012 6:43:00 AM
Yes, it's probably a spider and two too .... lol .. Thank you for visiting my poem, and left a comments. xoxo love Anne-Lise :)
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