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- All In a Day -

As the heart are now wailing
Left without saying good bye
Loneliness eat every inch of my body

If you only knew
Nothing can make me forget

After that you decided to go

Don’t know what to do
and it scares me half to death
Young love does not go out of date





04/09/2020
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All In A Day Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: William Kekaula
2nd place in the contest

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James Inman Date: 1/31/2021 8:27:00 AM Memories Anne-Lise Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/31/2021 9:50:00 AM - James, many thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michelle Faulkner Date: 9/17/2020 11:58:00 AM Many congratulations on your win, such a bittersweet memory of young love~ Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 9/17/2020 9:29:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful Acrostic poem and picture. Love your line, "Young love does not go out of date." That is so very true. Somethings one cannot forget. Enjoy your win with a hug................. Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 9/17/2020 7:46:00 AM Very moving poem, Anne-Lise. CONGRATS on your win. Janice Login to Reply

Newton Ranaweera Date: 9/17/2020 5:08:00 AM Congratulations on your 2nd placement in this contest, Anne-Lise!! Login to Reply

Hilo Poet Date: 9/16/2020 9:17:00 PM Enjoyed the breath instilled in this endearing brevity, Anne-Lise, intrigued by your approach to the theme, 'twas a heartfelt read indeed! Congrats on your honorable win, Aloha! William Login to Reply

Anisha Dutta Date: 9/11/2020 8:18:00 PM I agree.Young love never goes out of date. All the best. Hugs. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/12/2020 5:52:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Anisha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios Date: 9/9/2020 9:03:00 AM Powerful last line Anne-Lise My best to you. PR Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/10/2020 4:46:00 AM - Panagiota, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 9/8/2020 10:38:00 AM Best wishes in the contest dear friend - ah young love is a love everyone goes through and breaking up is heart rending - well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/10/2020 4:46:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, sister Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One Date: 9/6/2020 12:28:00 PM Young love grows... Sometimes takes s break, but comes back.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/10/2020 4:45:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael Date: 9/6/2020 6:58:00 AM That 's love with youthful passions... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/6/2020 10:56:00 AM - Arturo, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan Date: 9/5/2020 7:32:00 AM You've done well in successfully making the point of the theme in your Acrostic, Anne-Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/5/2020 11:15:00 AM - Jenna, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus Date: 9/5/2020 1:43:00 AM Definitely not, Anne-Lise! Love and heartbreak look not at age; being young at heart is enough to make one a victim! Regards & Hugs // paul Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/5/2020 11:15:00 AM - Love has no age limit ... always be young at heart, Paul :) -Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 9/4/2020 6:05:00 PM bittersweet flow of young love's end, anne...how lovely!..huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/5/2020 1:09:00 AM - Nette, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Fleming Date: 9/4/2020 11:04:00 AM Glad I stopped by and read this, Anne-Lise...beautifully poignant...and has an air of desperation about it all...and tinged with such a great sadness that makes an instant and deep impression. Very dramatic! Great poetry!! My very best regards, Anne -Lise. P.s deserves a high placing in the contest. Good luck! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/4/2020 12:10:00 PM - Thank you very much for your uplifting comments, greatly appreciate your words and wishes, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith Date: 9/4/2020 5:48:00 AM Good acrostic Anne-Lise, Best wishes in the contest... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/4/2020 7:37:00 AM - Many thanks for the visit and lovely comments ... a simple poem, but ... I give it a try in the contest, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/4/2020 5:24:00 AM You captured those feelings nicely--great use of acrostic, Anne-Lise. All the best. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/4/2020 7:34:00 AM - I so often write free verse ... it's easiest ... :))) - Sometimes I have to change :) - Vijay, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel Date: 9/4/2020 4:58:00 AM A sad and unforgettable day, Anne-lise, well conveyed:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/4/2020 7:32:00 AM - Yes, a sad day ... many thanks for the visit and lovely comments, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)