- a Bird Sings Only When It Is Happy -

A white dove flies gracefully across vision
Shines as transparent pieces of ivory joy

I give you a Candle of Love, for inspire and encourage you
Blown gently upon a soft warm lovely breeze 

Falling slowly like a ripe apple 
With sad confusion, I promise you heaven

Everything will fall into place and gives you, perfect pleasure of life
Love whispering on wings fluttering deep

It is possible to change your tomorrow, if you seek your dream today
To watch the light change i pray for your beauty to return

My arms are full of flowers, the beauty the unfathomable grace
Reborn under a promise of color inside the mist bouquet dream 





Written by Liam Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :)  11.04.2015 
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/17/2015 6:11:00 AM
Liam Mate, I missed that POTD write that you and dear Anne-Lise wrote together. (I was away from the Soup during this time.) Anyway, belated Congrats to you and Anne-Lise on this wonderful couplet. Excellent!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 4/19/2015 3:58:00 PM
Great poem, congratulations on Poem of the Day, :) and a 7
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Date: 4/19/2015 3:03:00 PM
delighted to see you get poem of the day woohoooo congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/19/2015 12:56:00 PM
there you goo.. great POTD feature, anne and liam!
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Date: 4/19/2015 12:50:00 PM
Congrats on your collaboration being the poem of the day!! Sara
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Date: 4/19/2015 12:34:00 PM
Congratulations my dearest friends Liam n' Anne Lise on POTD!This is great! I'm so happy for both of you.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light! God bless you!:)Love n' Hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 4/19/2015 12:31:00 PM
- Congrats my friend Liam !!! - So much fun !!!! - I am happy that this was chosen as p.o.t.d. !!!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/19/2015 11:57:00 AM
YES! POTD for this lovely write! Congratulations dear Liam and Anne! HAPPY FOR YOUR BOTH! Hugs and smiles! Kim :D
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Date: 4/19/2015 9:38:00 AM
You both Rock!
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Date: 4/19/2015 9:37:00 AM
Bravo Liam, an excellent choice for poem of the day!
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Date: 4/19/2015 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations, to two great writers, having your excellent collaberation chosen as poem of the day. You both rock!
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Date: 4/19/2015 8:45:00 AM
Stopping back with congratulations on POD
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Date: 4/19/2015 4:59:00 AM
beautiful write, my friend
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Date: 4/18/2015 11:05:00 PM
You two are singing here
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Date: 4/18/2015 10:38:00 PM
This is so beautiful, a beautiful poem by two of my favourite people a perfect little couplet, great collaboration my friends, a 7 for a perfect poem. Take care......Vera..........
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Date: 4/18/2015 10:31:00 PM
A beautiful creation my friends. Great collab and a pleasure to read! A7 and very nice couplet poem...
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Date: 4/18/2015 4:43:00 PM
Great collaborative work you two..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/18/2015 4:03:00 PM
:)))))))))))))) - hug and <3 // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/18/2015 2:34:00 PM
Hi Liam n' Anne Lise!Another very beautiful and wonderful love poem penned by you my dearest friends.Just dazzling!Very beautifully penned.A 7+++ to each!A very romantic beautiful sweet and passionate love poem to be held so very close to my heart.smiling.I enjoyed it!Awesome!Your pens are truly mighty golden!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 4/18/2015 1:54:00 PM
I'm almost speechless at the imagery you two create together - this is divine Anne Lise and Liam:-) hugs jan xx 7 xx
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